Looking for a Beta for a m/m story

LoveBird1929

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Good Morning Fellow Literoticans!

If I'm not in the right spot will someone kindly direct me to where I should post my request? I'd greatly appreciate it :)

I'm currently working on a lightly yaoi inspired m/m story. Following the rules of yaoi, as I know them to be, the entire story is told from the younger bottom's perspective (he's 19) and the older top is the aggressor (he's 28). A portion of the story is told in 3rd person past tense with flash blacks to the night they first met being told in first person past tense.

I'm approx 50% done with the story (about 20,000 words as is) and hope to have completed in the next few weeks (but work is kicking my butt right now with the snow/ice storms hammering the country leaving me with hardly any free time to work on my stories at all), but I thought I'd go ahead and see if I might be able to find someone who might be interested in reading over the story once it's completed. I self edit, so the story will be sent to you as I plan to post it with minimal mistakes (haven't quite managed to reach that level of perfection yet I've been striving for my whole life lol).

The story is a spin-off on another story I've already posted. The characters involved in the story I'm currently working on are Shane and Revelin. If you're interested in seeing my writing style to determine if you might be interested in being my Beta for this story, I've included the link below to the story where Shane and Revelin are first introduced. They're only featured in the first part of the story.

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-deviant-spawn-christmas

Send me an msg if you think you might be interested...TIA!
 
Correction on Word Count

Was in a rush to get to work this morning, so I just noticed a mistake in my initial post. The story is currently 11,000 words with a final projected word count of approx 20,000. If anyone's interested in reading the story before I post it and providing me feedback on enjoyability, ease of reading as well as constructive criticism, please let me know. Thanks!
 
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