Trinique_Fire
Daddi's Princess
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- Dec 15, 2004
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I've never used this board on Lit before, but I'd like to find an editor for grammar and punctuation, sentence and story structure. I really don't want my storyline changed, but I need a pair of good eyes to read my story as it progresses and suggest any additions or suggest rearranging events, etc.
Basic breakdown:
Ausrine and K (Chandra) are close friends. Ausrine is in love with K, but K doesn't seem to notice, and if she does, she doesn't say much about it.
K runs a safe house just outside of the city, and she introduces Ausrine to an 18 year old named Surreal. Surreal helps Ausrine through her love and obsession with K, and against her better judgement, Surreal begins to fall for Ausrine.
Any takers?
Basic breakdown:
Ausrine and K (Chandra) are close friends. Ausrine is in love with K, but K doesn't seem to notice, and if she does, she doesn't say much about it.
K runs a safe house just outside of the city, and she introduces Ausrine to an 18 year old named Surreal. Surreal helps Ausrine through her love and obsession with K, and against her better judgement, Surreal begins to fall for Ausrine.
Any takers?