long time reader... first time writer

[silent_night]

i am a long-time reader... but a first time writer. i am looking for someone who will give me some firm constructive critisism, but also show me what my strengths are. i would like to think that in the many years i have been reading, i have been able to learn from other's.

i am not new to writing mind you... but in the past most of my writing have been graduate and college research papers = i.e. very boring. i've always wanted to write for literotica, but it's only been recently that i've found the time.

a little background on the story:

it is the first in what i hope will be a a series of stories about a guy's sexual escapades as a camp head lifeguard during a break from his graduate studies. there are some elements of truth to the stories from my own experiences, but as with any story, it is embelished with it's fair-share of fantasy.

if anyone is interested, let me know and i can send you a file in what-ever format (.txt, .pdf, .doc) you woud like.




[oh yeah, i'm dyslexic too... so don't rip on the spelling... no matter how much i think i've improved, i still won't catch every mistake]

 

[LadyCibelle]

i am a long-time reader... but a first time writer. i am looking for someone who will give me some firm constructive critisism, but also show me what my strengths are. i would like to think that in the many years i have been reading, i have been able to learn from other's.

i am not new to writing mind you... but in the past most of my writing have been graduate and college research papers = i.e. very boring. i've always wanted to write for literotica, but it's only been recently that i've found the time.

a little background on the story:

it is the first in what i hope will be a a series of stories about a guy's sexual escapades as a camp head lifeguard during a break from his graduate studies. there are some elements of truth to the stories from my own experiences, but as with any story, it is embelished with it's fair-share of fantasy.

if anyone is interested, let me know and i can send you a file in what-ever format (.txt, .pdf, .doc) you woud like.




[oh yeah, i'm dyslexic too... so don't rip on the spelling... no matter how much i think i've improved, i still won't catch every mistake]

Hi

I have a pretty full editing plate but helping you sound like a challenge and I'm not one to pass on a good challenge

If you want you can send me your story in Word .doc format at LadyCibelle. I have a 7-10 days turnaround, I do ALL my editing in red and it's easy to see the work I've done as I use the reviewing feature of Word.

If everything above is to your convenience send me your story and I'll give you the help you need.

 

[silent_night]

thanks... i sent you an email.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Just received it...you'll have it back within 10 days.

 

[silent_night]

did you try to send me the story back? i got an email from you... but couldn't pull the attachment off

 

[LadyCibelle]

did you try to send me the story back? i got an email from you... but couldn't pull the attachment off

Yup sent it...I'll try sending it back again.