Long multi part stories

[dfevans]

look I am an avid reader of many venues. I do like a long GOLD novel, yet I have found very few here. The best are usually 3 to 6 screns. Most writers here can not maintain a story line more then 2 parts with out being redundant. After part 3, you are borderline boring!

Advice to most authors, KISS, unless you really have a good idea AND OUTLINE, of where you are going with the story stop at part two!

Also, you MUST learn to use proper punctuation especially in dialogues. Do not make the reader guess who is speaking. This ruins the flow of the story and have to go back to figure out who is talking. Make it obvious with punctuation.

Also, keep away from third person narrative. BORRING!!! And very definitively, very amateurish.

Writing well is HARD work! You always need to keep your readers in mind. Re-read what you have written asking yourself, "If I was just reading this for the first time is it readable? Does it make sense in context?" If you do not follow what I am saying, then YOU do not know how to write and need to stop boring the rest of us!

Lastly, DO NOT keep using the same phrase over and over and over. "He pushed his hard, juicy dick into her sloppy pussy" only needs to be said once. More then that is redundant. Figure a different way to say it next time.

 

[Jada59]

Ha! Your first post here. You're giving advice on writing, yet you start out your first sentence with a lower case letter.

I've written novels. Not here. Personally I don't think this is the place for that. I write stories here. Most of them pretty short. This is the place for erotic stories and it's pretty hard in my mind to keep a story going and keep it erotic.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Personal preferences do not make good guidance for aspiring writers, and that's all you've delivered here. In a delightfully amateurish misspelled kind of a way. I'd suggest you look closely at your own writing before pontificating. Just saying .

 

[KeithD]

Most writers here can not maintain a story line more then 2 parts with out being redundant.

OK, I stopped reading here. There are many thousands of writers with works here, and you've read stories by most of them and feel able to make this sweeping judgment? I don't think so. You might like to back up and come back in with a little less attitude.

 

[Son_of_Battles]

Sounds more like a reader than a writer. Probably read a couple bad stories and came here to rant about it and tell people what he wants.

Don't worry dude, I'll throw up the Bat Signal and we will all get right on fixing all the stories for you. Maybe just give us a couple days. There's something like a million or so stories we have to re edit and rewrite.

 

[MelissaBaby]

look I am an avid reader of many venues. I do like a long GOLD novel, yet I have found very few here. The best are usually 3 to 6 screns. Most writers here can not maintain a story line more then 2 parts with out being redundant. After part 3, you are borderline boring!

Advice to most authors, KISS, unless you really have a good idea AND OUTLINE, of where you are going with the story stop at part two!

Also, you MUST learn to use proper punctuation especially in dialogues. Do not make the reader guess who is speaking. This ruins the flow of the story and have to go back to figure out who is talking. Make it obvious with punctuation.

Also, keep away from third person narrative. BORRING!!! And very definitively, very amateurish.

Writing well is HARD work! You always need to keep your readers in mind. Re-read what you have written asking yourself, "If I was just reading this for the first time is it readable? Does it make sense in context?" If you do not follow what I am saying, then YOU do not know how to write and need to stop boring the rest of us!

Lastly, DO NOT keep using the same phrase over and over and over. "He pushed his hard, juicy dick into her sloppy pussy" only needs to be said once. More then that is redundant. Figure a different way to say it next time.

You should ask for your money back.

 

[GroverLang]

Weird

Strange they joined eight years ago and only now, after presumably reading thousands of stories, decided they need to give advice. Especially in such a badly written post. If the join date said May 2020 I would think this was a windup and, even though that’s not the case, I’m wondering if it is someone having fun. It’s just the waiting eight years that’s weird. At least the advice, and the post, is so bad it brightens the day.

 

[SimonDoom]

I have a feeling this is going to be another one of those hit and run posts, and we won't hear from the OP again.

Which may be for the best.

 

[lovecraft68]

You should ask for your money back.

Lit has a no refund policy, he's on the hook for what he paid.