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Tie of Hope

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OOC: I wouldn't mind on to two people joining, at the most. I don't mind if you post 1st Person, just make it seem somewhat literate. This is more of a force-type scenerio.

Now this was really living. Alyssa Kate, or Ally as everyone else referred to her as, had it all. A massive mini-mansion in what many people would consider 'snob' hill. The blonde headed, blue eyed, heart breaker was just a few days away from prom night, when she'd make herself known as prom queen. But until then, she'd keep at her own prissy little self. Ally was never mean to anyone...well, with the occasional bullying of the every-day school nerd. That was probably it. So with a few enemies, how hard could it be to bask in the attention? Not at all. Ally had never considered the posibility of a stalker.

With the floor modle television playing on some random music show, she entered her own personal bathroom. The massive house was an easy to enter place, and in such a lovely neighboorhood, she didn't expect an intruder. Stripping herself delicately of her cloathing, revealing finely tanned skin, lucious curves around her body exposed to the light of the room-sized bathroom, she went about undoing her hair. The eighteen year old wanted nothing more than a nice hot bath. It was around twelve, and her parents were gone for the week, off on some business trip, leaving her alone at home happily. She'd thrown a house party a day before, and was now practically dying in the love letters.

Turning the water on in the walk in shower, she let her mid-back length blond hair down. Scanning over her petite, delicate form, with well sized perky breasts and an overall gorgeous form, satisfied she slipped into the shower, closing the sliding door behind her. Sure, what girl didn't have some fantasy of hot shower sex, or some forceful male creeping in to consult them while in the shower? She almost felt guilty for the secret wanting, never imagining it a reality. Taking the soap, she hummed to herself while soaping up her hot, wet body. Only on the television, right?
 
John

OOC: John
180 lbs
Brown hair, blue eyes
Age : 18

I sat perched in the tree outside her window. I watched her shower, rubbing the warm water and soap all over her naked body. I could already feel myself getting hard just from watching her. I rubbed my cock through my pants, and continued watching in silence.

I had been watching her for months at school. I tried asking her out once, but she turned me down. I don't blame her, girls as hot as her could only go out with jocks, and cool guys, not average joes like me. I was reduced to spying on her from outside her window. I had been watching her for weeks now, never getting the courage to act, until now.

I slowly crept from the branch in the tree towards the window. I slid it open quietly, without her hearing me. I crept up next to the shower, and slowly took off my shirt, revealing my muscular chest. I suddenly pulled open the shower door and she turned around, shocked.

"Hello, Ally."
 
With a squeak of fright, the girl dropped the soap, staring wide eyed before trying to cover herself. The soap dropped from her hands as she backed up somewhat. Curse her rotten luck.

"Oh my god! How did you get in here?!" She shreiked, grasping the handle of the sliding door and closing it as quickly as possible. Where could she go? The nearest phone was in her room, and how would she get to it from inside of a shower. The blonde was panicing, so very typical. Through the blurry glass of the sliding door she could still see him, her blue eyes filled with a certain fear as she tried to hold the door closed.

"Leave! Please, and I sware I won't tell on you! What do you want? Money? Take it, it's in my room, just get out!"
 
"I don't want money, Ally," I said as I opened the shower door, towering over her as she cringed into the corner. "No, Ally. I just want you."

I grabbed her arm and pulled her up close to me. I looked her in the eyes, with burning fury in mine. "I bet you don't even remember me, bitch. I asked you out months ago. You didn't have to say yes, you could have turned me down politely, and that would have been that. But no, you laughed at me, as if I was joking. In front of all your friends, you humiliated me."

"No, I don't want money, Ally. I want revenge."
 
Ally stared at him, dumbstruck, unable to do anything much. She had taken a bit of karate, but quit after it went past the basics on to climbing walls and such. But what good would it do against this guy, who she barely even knew. Attempting to twist herself from his grasp, she shreiked once more, raking her painted pink nails over his chest trying to get away.

"God, I barely even know you! ...wait...your that Loser from school, I remember you! Let go! I'm definately calling the police on you now!" The girl shover hard, trying to push him back through the sliding door, hoping it'd leave her enough space to run for the phone. Screaming wouldn't help. No one was there, except for the dog, who was likely on the first floor sleeping. And he wouldn't be able to hear her over the music.

"Let me go, please!" That prissy tone the eighteen year old held turned to pleading. What did he want her for? Was he going to kill her? Her voice seemed to catch itself in her throat as she was twisting herself between boldness and fear, unsure what to do, and unable to speak.
 
She pushed into me and tried to get through. I reached into my back pocket and pulled out a knife, which I held up to her neck. "ouI won't kill you... if you're good."

"No, I'm just going to show you what you were missing out on by not going out with me," I said, as I reached down to her cunt with my free hand and inserted a finger. I could see her jolt back in shock as I ran my finger around the inside of her pussy. I stuck a second in, and told her "Face it, Ally. There's nowhere for you to run. You're mine."
 
Shivering somewhat, the water still running from the shower head, the girl recoiled from the knife, managing to slip out of his grasp and move to the farest spot of the walk in shower, slowly sinking to the floor in the corner. She glared, watching him angerily. The way he touched her..it almost made her want him to keep going. Almost. But that stubborn boldness found it's way back as she wrapped her arms around her knees, bringing them to her chest. He had a knife. So the words she spoke were uneasy and fear stricken.

"No! I'm not your's, you'd better leave now, you psycho! You can't do this to me, leave me alone!" Tears swelling in her eyes, locking her hands together she stared at him fearing that knife just as much as what he was intending on doing to her. She was a virgin, she didn't want this. It certainly wasn't something she'd planned on doing any time soon.
 
"I beg to differ, Ally," I said as I towered over her in the corner of the shower. "Because there's nobody here to stop me."

I pulled her up by her hair, bringing her face to mine. I wrapped my hand around her breast and started groping her. She tried to pull away but I pulled her back in. I could see the tears swell up in her eyes. When I was finished with her breasts, I threw her to the floor in the shower, slamming her into the wall. While she was on her knees on the ground, I unzipped my soaking wet pants and pulled them off, throwing them out of the shower, placing my giant hard cock in front of her face.

I grabbed her hair and pulled her face close to my dick. "Now, suck me off, bitch," I said, holding the knife to her neck. "And don't you think of disobeying me," I said, pushing the flat of the blade into her neck.
 
"There's no fucking way I'm putting that thing in my mouth.." She responded bitterly, laughing harshly in responce to him, attempting to make up for her small 'cute' appearance with words. She didn't care about the knife when it came to this, she wasn't going to suck his cock, no way in the world. Tugging her head in the direction away from him helplessly, her hot wet body trembling in fear she trailed off, tears mixing with droplets of water from her wet, blonde hair. Drawing up whatever courage she could, she spat at him.

"And it's Alyssa to you, asshole. My parent's will be home soon, and then we'll see..." Her voice shaking with fear, she attempted to pull away from him once more. It was a bluff, and a brave on at that. But she was more concerned on if he'd buy it or not.
 
"Alyssa? You're lucky I even call you by name at all, bitch."

"And don't think your parents can save you. They wouldn't even notice me if I was hiding behind the door. All it would take is one second with their backs turned, and..." as I signalled by swiping the blade across my neck, "and you're an orphan, Ally."

"Of course, maybe if you keep me happy, I'll be out of here before your parents come home," I said, keeping my cock unflinchingly in front of her face. "It's your call, Ally."
 
Ally fell silent, turning her head away from his cock. Silent tears streamed down her face as she swallowed hard. Locking her jaws she bit her bottom lip, attempting to focus on something other than the man attempting to force her to suck him. Her concern for her parents, though very wide at first slowly died. They wouldn't be home...not for another week. That was good. That ment he couldn't hurt them. Listening to the music in the background over the still running shower, she tried to concentrate on the hard rock song, drawing up another string of courage.

"Get that out of my face, before I bite it off." She uttered darkly, not daring to look at him. Just as quick as she'd got the courage to speak, it died down and she whimpered somewhat, almost regretting the threat.
 
I grabbed her by the hair and slapped her across the face. "You'd best do what I say, cunt. Because I can make this a lot worse for you," I said, as I placed the tip of the knife on her cheek. I quickly pulled on it, cutting her cheek, causing a trickle of blood to seep out as she winced in pain. "Don't think this is just some idle threat, slut. Because I've got no problems with seeing you dead. I'm just giving you a chance to redeem your worthless life."
 
Tears found themselves in the teen's blue eyes once more, the throbbing cut on her cheek enough to dispense that stubborness for now. Almost hesitantly she leaned forward obediantly, taking his cock in her mouth and sucking softly. Those tears continued to flow freely from her eyes, stinging the open cut on her cheek. Perhaps the most vile thing she'd ever done.

With the music and water filling her ears, she began to think quickly, pondering ways to get away from him, and get something to defend herself with. There was the razor. Her gaze flickered to the side wall where all of the supplies for the bathroom were aligned neatly. She didn't dare reach for it. What good would a razor do against the knife he was holding? Unable to cope with his cock in her mouth, she withdrew sharply, coughing somewhat.

"God...thats disgusting.."
 
"What's the matter, Ally? You don't like my cock?" I said, as I held her face back against my cock. "Well, I didn't like having the entire school laughing at me for asking you out. I didn't like having your friends beat me up after school. I didn't like being ridiculed every single day for the past 5 months!" I yelled as I forced her face less than an inch away from my cock, pushing the knife back into her neck. "And I can think of a lot of things you'll like even less. So get back to work, bitch."
 
Tears continuing to flow from her eyes, she turned her head away from him as best she could. Oh, but was all of this her fault? What was she to do, ruin her image at school with going out with him, this loser she barely knew? Well, she certainly hadn't thought that anyone would beat him up, or go after him the next five months. Though she didn't dare speak to him, her sights turning back to the knife. He would kill her, she'd finally came to realize, and leave her there. He didn't want the money, and she was sure no bargain would work. Almost reluctantly, trembling in fear she took his cock in one of her hands, hoping it would make the length she had to place in her mouth smaller.

Again her thoughts turned back to the razor as she placed his cock in her mouth, sucking gently. She wanted to scream, and hit, and try and get away, but stuck inside of the shower made it difficult to do anything. Her blue eyes, still swelled with tears moved pleadingly back up to his face, hoping all of this would end soon.
 
I held my hand on the back of her head, holding her head in place. "Good job, cunt." I moved my hand down to her breasts, and was about to rub them, when I realized the knife was getting in the way. I couldn't just drop it, she'd retaliate. But I didn't want to have to take her one-handed. I was forced to wait, until the time came that I could use both my hands.

I pushed her head further down on my cock. "Now suck me harder, bitch. Suck me until I cum."
 
With a regenerating stubborness, her face burning with anger and embarassment of this all, having been assulted in the shower and now forced to suck cock, she whimpered. She didn't want him cumming in her mouth. She wanted him to leave her alone. Glaring up at him she began to suck harder, gently at first. And then she bit, perhaps with only one fourth of the courage she should have had, pulled back away from him, ripping her head away from him.

Tears returning to her eyes, wondering if that small nip had caused any pain at all, she clung desperately to the wall. What would he do? Well he certainly wouldn't be happy about it. Though Ally could care less, why should she have to listen to him? Pressing her face against the wet wall, the hot water now spilling over her thin body, nipples hardened from the cold of drying, she closed her eyes, wishing it all would just disappear.
 
I jolted back in pain as she pulled away. I dropped the knife in pain and clutched my dick, quickly realising my mistake as I stamped my foot down on the handle of the knife and pulled it away from her. I grabbed her by the hair and pulled her face up to mine. "What the fuck was that, bitch?" I yelled, as I slapped her across the face, as my cock still throbbed in pain. She had a strong mouth, which I usually liked, but not like this. "What the fuck do you think you're doing? If you can't suck my cock right, maybe I'll just have to take you away with me until you learn to please me right!" I yelled, slapping her again.
 
She'd reached for the knife, only to have him step on the handle. Swearing mentally, she shreiked as he hit her, attempting to get out of his grasp. Her hand curled into a fist, prepared to punch him in his cock, and fight however well she could to get away from him. Heart pounding in her chest, she glared bitterly, eyes filled with a certain hatred, until he spoke, making her blood seeming to freeze in her veins. Take her away?

She quickly dispursed that fist, a few tears falling from her eyes as he slapped her again. The slap wasn't her main concern, despite the fact that he cheek was now red and pulsing.

"No! Please don't! I'll be good, I sware! Just don't take me away!" Her voice was a desperate plead, fading off and cracking as she began to sob now, tears falling freely from her eyes as she tried to get out of his grasp once more.
 
I picked up the knife with my toes and threw it out behind me out of the shower. If I needed it, I could stil get to it before her, as I long as I kept a hold on her.

"You'll be good?" I asked, as the water pounded down on my red, throbbing cock. "Then kiss me better," I said, as I pushed her head back down to my cock with both hands.
 
This was all he wanted, right? He'd have his little fun and then leave, wouldn't he? Well, that was what it seemed like. Reluctantly, with some hesitation, wiping tears mixed with water from her cheeks she took his cock in her hand once more, her soft lips trailing the length before she slipped it into her mouth once more. Resisting the urge of wanting to back away in disgust, she began to suck timidly at first and then gradually harder. Anything to please him, as long as it made him leave her alone. Her actions were driven completely on fear, not daring to look up at him.

Still those tears returned to her face, her gaze moving past him, out on the floor. The knife. Or the razor behind her. But how would she get to it quick enough? Whimpering quietly, tossing these options around in her head, she continued to suck hardly, wondering if biting him, harder this time might work.
 
I stood and moaned as she sucked my cock. I wanted nothing better than to ram my cock down her throat and face-fuck her, or fuck her wildly against the wall of the shower, but I was still raw from her biting me. I couldn't take her hard yet, I had to bide my time. But her tongue against my throbbing member felt nice, I had to wait until I was up for it.

I held her head in place, pushing myself in slightly further. "Mmm... good, Ally. Suck me harder."
 
Fearfully she did as told, not wanting to leave her house if it could be avoided. Such a thing was worse than the threat of the knife. She sucked harder, feelign him push his cock deeper into her mouth, almost gagging as he did so, but smoothly turning the gag into a swallow. Her eyes didn't leave that knife, her tongue slowly moving around his cock, attempting to rush through the process so he would leave. Or so she would have enough time to make a run for the knife. Wide eyes finally daring to travel to his face, strands of her wet blonde hair falling infront of her gaze, she whimpered once more. Why wasn't he stopping? Wasn't he done humiliating her? She was sure this was worse than anything she could have ever done to him.

Trying to focus her concentration on something else, like the warm running water cascading over her and hitting the smooth floor of the walk in shower, or the music playing in the background, she tried to pull back some. Wasn't he done yet?
 
I could feel her pull away, put I held the back of her head in place. "You're not going anywhere, Ally. And my cock's not coming out of your mouth until I'm ready to cum. So you'd better get to work, Ally."
 
Wearily she continued to suck, certainly not liking the feeling of this. After another moment or so, she pulled away once more, attempting to get his cock out of her mouth. She continued to try and pull away, refusing to suck on his cock anymore. It seemed that on and off stubborn anger was getting the better of her.
 
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