Little Hearts Club

[MichaelS101662]

i have what i think would be a great story line idea, but lack the neccesary skills to write it myself. i am looking for someone that can do the actuall writing from the ideas i have for this story. are there any good writers out there that would like to take on this task? i don't really care who gets the actual credit (an honorable mention of me in this story (maybe saying: from the ideas of MichaelS) would be nice).

 

[snooper]

A few more details might encourage replies.

I'm not saying you have to give the idea away but the genre, to say the least, would help. Erotic Horror authors do not often also write Romance, for example, and First Time specialists are not often found doing Mature stories. The writers of short (single episode) stories don't often write 100K word novels. (And vice versa for all of the above.)

The only clue we have is your title, which made me think that you want something under age, which is not allowed on here.

 

[MichaelS101662]

It would fall under either Lesbian or Incest (wish there was a category specifically for Lesbian Incest). Not sure what all to say about it that would give away too much and take away from the story set-up. Anyone wanting to know more about it, please...feel free to contact me here.

 

[MichaelS101662]

well, since this is getting nowhere...nevermind

 

[Texguy84]

well, since this is getting nowhere...nevermind

Well, you're gonna get out of it what you put into it. This is the story ideas thread, you haven't given us a story idea yet. You've given us a story genre. Give us more details, and we can help you flesh something out for the 99.99% of lit readers who don't hang out in the Story Ideas forum.

 

[MichaelS101662]

ok, a brief run-down of the story is this:

a group of schoolgirl friend are dared to shave themselves by a group of boys, unbeknownst to them at the onset, they are part of an age-old tradition barried by the towns folk and the school district that started ages ago, by their own grandmothers, followed by their mothers (whom had discovered a previous "Little Hearts Club, from hunderds of hears prior). They get introduced to a strict society of lesbian incest where each girl, upon completion of their initiation, are morked with a tattoo of twin adjoining hearts placed on their vaginal mound, just above their clits. Each heart has a letter...one has an "L" the other, an "H"...sybmolizing the Little Hearts Club.

one of the girls is a cheerleader and also a contortionist, able to give herself oral, there's also a set of twins. As far as I've ever gotten from the story is, the mothers of the girls discover their daughters discovery of this tradition, get together and complete the initiation...which is supposed to be carried out by each mother teaching their daughters the joy of lesbian incest. The mothers help the daughters win the bet and one mother is a tattooist who places the twin hearts on each girl after initiation.

maybe that will clear things up.

 

[Texguy84]

Sounds rather interesting, and very different. How isolated is this town? Is it way the heck out in the sticks, or is it a suburb of Houston? This story probably works better for little towns out in the middle of nowhere, the sort of town where the youth will be stir crazy wanting to do something fun.

Also, where do the guys of the town fit in? Do they know about this? If not, do any of them discover it? Do any of the guys with girlfriends share notes, and realize that the heart tatoos aren't unique to their own girlfriends? Then you can have a whole mystery thing with the guys trying to figure out what's going on without getting caught.

 

[MichaelS101662]

I feel a town not too far out in the sticks would be appropriate. As I have it figured, a select few know the whole story...more like the City Council, and the fathers of the girls (whom, I might add have remained out of the picture to keep from being associtaed with what is concidered a disgrace to the town and to minimize it from occuring again)

the boys in question will (of course) lose the bet and by the end of the story, will end up having to streak through the school. They had uncovered only an inkling of the disgrace, but not the whole story.

the tattoos are to be identical to all involved. not individualized.

I had written a pledge for the Little Hearts Club...but won't devulge that here. albeit to say, the members of the Little Hearts Club swear off men...except for a one time thing with a guy in order to continue the legacy and have a child (it may be possible for one of the mothers to have become a doctor and has the knowledge of artificial insimination.

 

[bisexplicit]

And, of course, all the characters are eighteen plus...

 

[Texguy84]

And, of course, all the characters are eighteen plus...

No doubt, you could restrict the story to the seniors in high school (the older seniors, at that) and still have more than enough characters to confuse people.

Oh, random bit of advice: Give your characters names starting with different first letters whenever possible. Easier to tell Kevin from James from Sharon than it is John from James from Jessica.

 

[MichaelS101662]

so, who wants to write the story?

 

[MichaelS101662]

I take it that this is a dead issue and I should scrap the whole idea. Thanks for listening anyway.

 

[Texguy84]

I take it that this is a dead issue and I should scrap the whole idea. Thanks for listening anyway.

You could try writing it yourself, there are a large number of volunteer editors at Literotica who will be happy to help you brush up or improve your story after you write it. Lots of us just have other things that we're also trying to finish writing.

 

[MichaelS101662]

if i were capable of writing it myself, i would have...but i'm not, sorry.

 

[MichaelS101662]

if i were capable of writing it myself, i would have...but i'm not, sorry. i would really appreciate someone doing this story for me.

 

[Never]

What's good for the wolf is better for the wolfhound.

How long did you want this story to be?

 

[MichaelS101662]

I'd like it to be several chapters with as much description as possible., after all, there would be several characters involved. possibly branching off into other stories. I can come up with the general ideas, but not specific enough to write myself.

 

[MichaelS101662]

Well, it was worth a shot. guess it will remain unwritten.

 

[MichaelS101662]

if anyone would like to undertake this story, i would prefer a female author so that it comes out with all the needed descriptions, feelings and emotions it calls for.

 

[MichaelS101662]

how do I pull a forum off of here. this seems to be a very dead issue and would like to remove it.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Give the writers a bit to think about this, Michael. Many of us are writing Halloween Contest stories and have other projects in process too, including novels.

"At least 2 chapters" is something like 6 Lit pages or... thinking... 25-30 MS Word pages... something like 6 or 7000 words... That's a large investment in time to committe too. When someone does take it on you can expect it to take several months or longer. Right now you have more than 290 reads on this thread. Believe me, people are thinking about it.

I just finished a story of 1 Lit page someone asked for that took about a week and a half. Anyone of us could crank out some pulp crap and call it a story, but that's not what we do.

JJ

 

[Carnevil9]

Michael S - DIY, dude! Don't sell yourself short. Your posts don't seem to indicate that you have no command of the written word. Give it a shot! You might surprise yourself. What have you got to lose?......Carney

 

[snooper]

... "At least 2 chapters" is something like 6 Lit pages or... thinking... 25-30 MS Word pages... something like 6 or 7000 words...

This does not compute. One Lit page is about 3750 words, so 6 lit pages are something over 20,000 words. Measuring in MSWord pages depends entirely on page size, margins, and font size, therefore there is no accurate estimate possible; Lit pages are consistent in all of these elements.

 

[emap]

Ummm snoopy your a tad off on the lit page size, I have a three page story and the first page is 4033 words. Though I think it's not so much the word count as the line count, it shows up as 292 lines, but I am not sure if it is counting the blank lines between paragraphs, and I remember reading what seemed to be longer stories on one page with no blank lines.

Huh, do you realize, this is the first time I've caught you being wrong? I swear I think maybe your starting to get a little old, long ways behind sirhugs though so don't feel bad.

 

[snooper]

Ummm snoopy your a tad off on the lit page size, I have a three page story and the first page is 4033 words. ...

You must use short words, and short paragraphs. Selecting at random (the first story in "New Stories" at this moment Muse by lgreenwood), its first page has 3,804 words. The figure I quoted was, if my ageing memory serves me correctly, that offered by Weird Harold.