Listening to advice

[BoredinLeather]

I got a lot of really helpful advice when I wrote my first story. I carried that into a sequel story that was so detailed and different, that I ended up rewriting the first so it fit together better. It’s now broken into three parts, and part one just got published!

Just wanted to say thank you for the help, I’ll remain receptive to it in the future.

https://www.literotica.com/s/latex-fetish-unleashed-part-1

 

[Whanmore]

It was fun. The main thing was you started this story too early. The wake-up and the chores are a boring part and not needed. Skip to the good stuff. This story coulve began with getting the package and wife is already gone.

 

[BoredinLeather]

It was fun. The main thing was you started this story too early. The wake-up and the chores are a boring part and not needed. Skip to the good stuff. This story coulve began with getting the package and wife is already gone.

I get it, part 2 gets pretty off the rails, and 3 more so.

 

[Whanmore]

I get it, part 2 gets pretty off the rails, and 3 more so.

Keep Writing, Baby!

 

[BoredinLeather]

Yay, Part 2 is up!

Keep Writing, Baby!

Here’s Part 2