Listening in

Chicklet

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Hey All,

I've recently started a story about a young woman who hears her brother and his girlfriend having sex in the room next to hers, which starts a curiosity that I want to develope into the girl eventually involving herself in a threesome with the brother. I hope you could follow that, I'm a little bit sleepy. So, do you think that this is a good idea? I asked my boyfriend and he just shrugged, he's not much help sometimes = p Does anyone have any suggestions on how I can get this story from point A to point B?

Chicklet
 
Hay I like that Idea a twist on a strong theme run with it and if b/f says he dosnt like it he is not teling the truth i know men that lust after there sisters
 
My boy doesn't have any sisters of his own, and I don't particularly lust after my brothers, but do you have any idea how I could make it realistic for her to want to get into bed with him?
 
I think I'm gonna keep my kitty for my Av, but I think I could hook you up with a peek if you want - PM me with your email and I'll send you one if you're interested

Chicklet
 
Perhaps you could make the girl bi and very attracted to her bf's sister. Personally, I know that a nice swimming pool and a few margaritas could loosen up things. :cool:
 
Excellent idea. I was sort of leaning along that line but it's nice to know someone else agrees with me.

Chicklet
 
flip the coin

How about the sister listens and masturbates getting more and more horny and eventually brother and gf stop cos she is making so much noise screaming and rush in to check on her...... all three horny and naked in one room.... girlfriend says she lost out on an orgasm and sister offers to give it to her.
 
dirty poet and stranger...

I like these ideas. Thank you = )

Chicklet
 
i think listening in is a really good idea for a story i wounder if it has been done.
 
MrFrost said:
i think listening in is a really good idea for a story i wounder if it has been done.

previously I was informed that *everything* had already been done <wink>

Chicklet
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Um...yeah. Perhaps you really are screwed.

LOL = )

But on a serious note, I think that my interests are just too mainstream. The *ONE* time I dallied from my interests, I wrote a story called "private lessons" about a teacher and a student sort of lusting after each other and ending up getting together in the end. Let me note to you that I have NEVER, EVER read anything like that. I knew they were out there, but I had no idea what they were like. Most of my feedback has been neutral, people telling me that my story was too standard. This was news to me, since I didn't know. Apparently everything I did was average, normal stuff to be found in a story like this. Here's the kicker - I went to look at it on the list, to see what it looked like and to check out its format and stuff. There was another story called Private Lessons right on top of mine (about a month older) with (shudder) the SAME CHARACTER NAMES. This freaked me out.

Chicklet (trying hard to do the best she can)
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Lol, Chicklet, I think we could be good friends. :eek:)

Having the same character names, though...were the two of you linked telekinetically or something? Just a thought.

I hope not, the other author was about 20 yrs older and MALE. I don't wanna be hooked up telepathically to a MALE, I might explode!

Chicklet
 
yeah but the sheer lack of thought might make my head implode
 
my boyfriend came in and read this thread, and insisted that I tell everyone that I wouldn't mind if he and I were mentally linked <shudder> so, just for the record <shudder> I *would not* mind <whimper> being mentally connected to my boyfriend. <kill me now>
 
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