Like a thief in the night, they stole your hearts

athena_by_night

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Hello Everyone~

For those of you who are part of my merry band of faithful readers, chapter 10 is now available for your delectation. It answers or starts to answer one of the burning questions you have had, but not completely. So, you might look askance at me for this, but it continues beyond this chapter.

In many ways, it will be hard to say goodbye to some of these characters, at least for me. And some of the directions this story has taken were beyond the original vision and scope I had, but its been a delightful journey. Hopefully you feel that way too as you introduce yourselves to them. With the exception of one particularly evil character, I would be friends with all of them and certainly wouldn't kick a few of them out of my bed. LOL Too bad they only exist in my head.

Thank you for reading and voting and commenting. They all bow to your appreciation and laudatory skills as well. :rose:

Marie
 
athena_by_night said:
Hello Everyone~

For those of you who are part of my merry band of faithful readers, chapter 10 is now available for your delectation. It answers or starts to answer one of the burning questions you have had, but not completely. So, you might look askance at me for this, but it continues beyond this chapter.

In many ways, it will be hard to say goodbye to some of these characters, at least for me. And some of the directions this story has taken were beyond the original vision and scope I had, but its been a delightful journey. Hopefully you feel that way too as you introduce yourselves to them. With the exception of one particularly evil character, I would be friends with all of them and certainly wouldn't kick a few of them out of my bed. LOL Too bad they only exist in my head.

Thank you for reading and voting and commenting. They all bow to your appreciation and laudatory skills as well. :rose:

Marie

You vixen!!!!! You've done it, yet again!! Here I am frothed and lain waste by the sultry heat of passions meshed before me in black and white. Then you stop it just as it begins to ram out a tempo of expected drooling. Envious, desirous, eager for the climactic end, I read on and on, only to find it stops before the desired end. And now, you expect me to wait for the next chapter. Or is it the chapter after that you will finally deside to finish this little escapade between Nadia and Luka? Grrrrrrrrrrrrr..........

And I loved it, Marie! This was an exciting chapter. In more ways than one. hehehe :p
 
windstormy said:
You vixen!!!!! You've done it, yet again!! Here I am frothed and lain waste by the sultry heat of passions meshed before me in black and white. Then you stop it just as it begins to ram out a tempo of expected drooling. Envious, desirous, eager for the climactic end, I read on and on, only to find it stops before the desired end. And now, you expect me to wait for the next chapter. Or is it the chapter after that you will finally deside to finish this little escapade between Nadia and Luka? Grrrrrrrrrrrrr..........

And I loved it, Marie! This was an exciting chapter. In more ways than one. hehehe :p

I love you Billy...so fiesty and passionate in your response. Glad you liked this chapter.... I thought it quite good... lol...I actually appreciated the scenes between Luka and Stephanos and well... you will just have to read the next to find out what happens.... evil grin.... Ri
 
athena_by_night said:
I love you Billy...so fiesty and passionate in your response. Glad you liked this chapter.... I thought it quite good... lol...I actually appreciated the scenes between Luka and Stephanos and well... you will just have to read the next to find out what happens.... evil grin.... Ri

Awww.....I love you too, Ri. :kiss: Not a day goes by that I don't think about you. And I too appreciated the scene between Luka and Stephanos. I was actually hoping for a little hanky panky there. But...As fate would have it...No dice... I really did enjoy the way you described the light thingy. That was mesmerising to me. And everything else that was in this chapter, I just soaked it up like a parched sponge. But you left me so frustrated with the love scene cutting off like that, I will just have to do something about this, now. Shame on you..... :p
 
windstormy said:
Awww.....I love you too, Ri. :kiss: Not a day goes by that I don't think about you. And I too appreciated the scene between Luka and Stephanos. I was actually hoping for a little hanky panky there. But...As fate would have it...No dice... I really did enjoy the way you described the light thingy. That was mesmerising to me. And everything else that was in this chapter, I just soaked it up like a parched sponge. But you left me so frustrated with the love scene cutting off like that, I will just have to do something about this, now. Shame on you..... :p

enjoy doing 'something about this' hehehe
 
windstormy said:
Awww.....I love you too, Ri. :kiss: Not a day goes by that I don't think about you. And I too appreciated the scene between Luka and Stephanos. I was actually hoping for a little hanky panky there. But...As fate would have it...No dice... I really did enjoy the way you described the light thingy. That was mesmerising to me. And everything else that was in this chapter, I just soaked it up like a parched sponge. But you left me so frustrated with the love scene cutting off like that, I will just have to do something about this, now. Shame on you..... :p

Yeah, that light thingy was very cool to write about. There's just such a mix of human emotion and pathos threaded throughout this story, a mishmash of beliefs and vampire lore, some accepted practices of medicine in the time I wrote this in and granted you have to suspend belief for some of it, but overall it achieved its effect. And the comical scene between Kolya and Aleksandr.....ooooohhhh that was fun. You go Aleksandr! LOL

And for the love scene..I was being a bit tantilizing by not revealing everything... :rose:
 
And the comical scene between Kolya and Aleksandr.....ooooohhhh that was fun. You go Aleksandr! LOL

OMG, yes...That was just too good, Ri. I loved that so much. I was very funny.
 
windstormy said:
OMG, yes...That was just too good, Ri. I loved that so much. I was very funny.

mmmmmm......thank you very much my friend..... and I love that y'all are now calling me Ri....very cool..... :nana:
 
athena_by_night said:
mmmmmm......thank you very much my friend..... and I love that y'all are now calling me Ri....very cool..... :nana:


Good...I've got some writing to do. I'll be here, but just working. Just hollar if you want me. Hmmm......That sounded salacious.... :p
 
windstormy said:
Good...I've got some writing to do. I'll be here, but just working. Just hollar if you want me. Hmmm......That sounded salacious.... :p

LOL...... I was working earlier..but got caught up in chatting.....I'll be around as well... happy, productive writing..... :kiss:
 
athena_by_night said:
LOL...... I was working earlier..but got caught up in chatting.....I'll be around as well... happy, productive writing..... :kiss:

I've been caught up in reading and chatting with ya too. But I did promise you another poem. Or should I wait another week?
 
windstormy said:
I've been caught up in reading and chatting with ya too. But I did promise you another poem. Or should I wait another week?

And then again, I may not be able to keep my eyes open long enough. I am just lain waste with having to get up so early and going to bed so late. Gees.....And I am just so inspired right now. :confused:
 
windstormy said:
I've been caught up in reading and chatting with ya too. But I did promise you another poem. Or should I wait another week?

You my dear.....have not had a chance to write all week. So please..... I know how much pleasure you get from it.... I'll be around throughout the weekend...plenty of time to catch up...... being altruistic..... ;)
 
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