kizkiz
Literotica Guru
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Initially, I thought I could get away without an editor, but I got rejected. My reason was snuff, so I have re-edited things, but I could use a fresh set of eyes. Especially on the first scene. I don't need any help with grammar or anything like that. Just someone who knows what they are doing to read it over and tell me if I'm way out there or not.
The story centers around a newly awakened Demon who seeks to punish those who break the seven deadly sins, namely lust, greed, and gluttony. It's a bit of a slow build, but there is sexual scenes/tension and plot throughout.
It is 16k words, so I understand if that's too much for some. At the very least, I could use someone to read the first scene (which is around 2k words or so).
The story centers around a newly awakened Demon who seeks to punish those who break the seven deadly sins, namely lust, greed, and gluttony. It's a bit of a slow build, but there is sexual scenes/tension and plot throughout.
It is 16k words, so I understand if that's too much for some. At the very least, I could use someone to read the first scene (which is around 2k words or so).
