LF feedback on riddle poems

[Bramblethorn]

Hi all, I've just posted a long story. It's mostly prose, 1001 Nights sort of thing, but poetry plays an important part in the story, with riddles like this one:

Tree I am, but from my forests strayed
Leafless branches clad in leaves men made
Fruitless, I bear every kind of fruit
Rootless, held to earth by iron root.

I'd be interested to hear your feedback. If you want to skip the prose, the riddles start on page 3.

https://www.literotica.com/s/riddle-of-the-copper-coin

Thanks!