let me know what you think pleassseeee!

[ub6ibfine]

Hey this is the first story I posted on literotica.com.
Tell me what you think. But before you read the thing
about him comming back home from work did happen.
But we had to leave after it.

Heres the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=27205

 

[Ghostposter]

I think you in the wrong place.
Try the story & Poetry Feedback.