NoJo
Happily Marred
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- May 19, 2002
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This is sort of feedback post, on quite a few stories I’ve read on this site since I became a member last week.
I admit it. I don’t know what erotica is. Some of the “stories” here (I won’t mention titles) are really just a sequence of verbal images of stuff that gets us turned on, so we can jerk off. And I admit that requires skill and imagination to do well. They have almost 100% sex. I can jerk off to them, the way I do with jpeg images on a porn site. But for me, the jpegs are more effective.
Some other stories are (sometimes brilliant) descriptions of a sexual encounter, a type that reminds me of looking at an mpeg file on a porn site. You might read (and re-read) it and imagine you’re one of the protagonists. They’re also 100% sex I suppose, but with a structure that resembles real sex: Build up, climax (maybe two or three if you’re lucky), followed by denouement.
It seems that a only a few stories here are really STORIES, which have maybe 10-20% actual sex: The other 80-90% sets time and place, motivation and character. I can get REALLY turned on reading this stuff, even if it has only a paragraph or so of "real sex."
For me erotica is about people. Not about anatomy, not even about sexual acts. I’d like a bit more story, a bit less sex. That would give me a lot more jerk-off fantasies.
I admit it. I don’t know what erotica is. Some of the “stories” here (I won’t mention titles) are really just a sequence of verbal images of stuff that gets us turned on, so we can jerk off. And I admit that requires skill and imagination to do well. They have almost 100% sex. I can jerk off to them, the way I do with jpeg images on a porn site. But for me, the jpegs are more effective.
Some other stories are (sometimes brilliant) descriptions of a sexual encounter, a type that reminds me of looking at an mpeg file on a porn site. You might read (and re-read) it and imagine you’re one of the protagonists. They’re also 100% sex I suppose, but with a structure that resembles real sex: Build up, climax (maybe two or three if you’re lucky), followed by denouement.
It seems that a only a few stories here are really STORIES, which have maybe 10-20% actual sex: The other 80-90% sets time and place, motivation and character. I can get REALLY turned on reading this stuff, even if it has only a paragraph or so of "real sex."
For me erotica is about people. Not about anatomy, not even about sexual acts. I’d like a bit more story, a bit less sex. That would give me a lot more jerk-off fantasies.