Lesbian romance help?

[MorLesMom]

I need help with the final touches on my story so that it can be accepted. It's around 9000 words long and it's mostly story till the end when they finally get angsty.
Anyone willing to help?

 

[AwkwardlySet]

I don't usually do editorial stuff, but if it's formatting I might be able to help. Send it to me as I have some free time now