lesbian rape story

[joanneluvsgirls]

hi to everyone im joanne and have been wanting to post a story that i have written and would love some feedback from all, the story is a fictional story of myself being raped by another woman, i think the story may drag on a little too much at the start but i will leave it up to you to decide, just looking for honest feedback from everyone either good or bad, hugs joanne xx

I have since deleted the story as some people here dont seem to like the idea of a woman being raped by another woman although it is only fantasy and as i understand it in fantasy land you are free to run wild with your imagination, anyways so to those who would have enjoyed that type of story but if anyone would like to read it id be happy to post it to you, joanne.

 

[Powertone]

If a guy'd done that he'd be facing 15 to life

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Sorry, but this fails on all levels.

First, the writing is ungrammatical throughout. Have you ever heard of capital letters and dialogue?

More seriously, this is not erotica. This is a brutal rape scene with no redeeming features. If you want to write a story here, the sex, however rough, needs to be consensual. Try reading the toplists of BDSM, Non-Consent, or even Fetish.

Rape, as you write it, is not what this site is about.