Lesbian power reversal with soft domination

[RachelPost]

I've got a story started where a political candidate surrenders to a younger aide. The story will include soft restraint and gentle domination. I am looking for someone to read the opening to the story and see if it's headed in a good direction.

Rachel

 

[sirhugs]

that's what happens when the vibrator comes with a reverse gear...

 

[RachelPost]

I will have to check my vibrator. I don't remember if it's a 4 speed or 5 speed. I do know it is a stick

that's what happens when the vibrator comes with a reverse gear...

 

[HeyAll]

That sounds really interesting. Let me know if you want me to check it.

 

[sirhugs]

and there is a fresh idea... Female MC cannot get her vibrator to work. Chnges batteries. No good. Male MC offers to help...misunderstanding & hilarity ensue.

But who is the male to the female, and goe does he come along to offer to help?

 

[RachelPost]

I NEED THIS STORY.
Thank you.

The story is pretty close to sending in for publishing. It's at the editor's now. I can't send it in the conversation. Could I send it to you via email?