Lesbian love triangle

[Buzzboy]

I know that would get your attention.

I've been playing with this idea for a lesbian sex story I got from a FFF pictorial from an issue of Penthouse.

These three hot lesbians get together every week for an threeway. The one rule with them is "no relationship, no love, just sex".

The three lesbians are:
Lisa, business woman/power lesbian, dominant, always needs to be in control.

Sarah, flighty, either implusive at one moment or indecisive the next. Sarah and Lisa were the ones who established the "just sex" rule after they both went through bad breakups.

Sasha, DJ and artist, free-spirited, sensual, makes her art by pouring paint on herself naked and rolling on the canvas. After meeting her at a club, Lisa and Sarah includes her in their weekly sex, making it a threeway.

Now the story starts Lisa, Sarah and Sasha having hot and intense sex. Afterwards, Lisa notices how close and friendly Sasha and Sarah have become and thinks they may fall in love. Trying to be a good friend, Lisa decides to put some distance between herself and the potenial lovers, thinking the two will blossom into a couple. At least that's the idea.

This is the beginning of the story but I think of the middle and the end.

Anyone have any ideas?

 

[grey228]

Bodily injury or threats can spice things up.

 

[Buzzboy]

Bodily injury or threats can spice things up.

Okay.

So who would be injuried?

Who would make the threats?

 

[Bob Waters]

I know that would get your attention.

I've been playing with this idea for a lesbian sex story I got from a FFF pictorial from an issue of Penthouse.

These three hot lesbians get together every week for an threeway. The one rule with them is "no relationship, no love, just sex".

The three lesbians are:
Lisa, business woman/power lesbian, dominant, always needs to be in control.

Sarah, flighty, either implusive at one moment or indecisive the next. Sarah and Lisa were the ones who established the "just sex" rule after they both went through bad breakups.

Sasha, DJ and artist, free-spirited, sensual, makes her art by pouring paint on herself naked and rolling on the canvas. After meeting her at a club, Lisa and Sarah includes her in their weekly sex, making it a threeway.

Now the story starts Lisa, Sarah and Sasha having hot and intense sex. Afterwards, Lisa notices how close and friendly Sasha and Sarah have become and thinks they may fall in love. Trying to be a good friend, Lisa decides to put some distance between herself and the potenial lovers, thinking the two will blossom into a couple. At least this the idea.

This is the beginning of the story but I think of the middle and the end.

Anyone have any ideas?

Lisa pulls away from them - as you said, trying to be a good friend. Realizes that all of her control, all of her work ID is all bs, she's miserable with out them and realizes that she's fallen in love with them both. S & S confront her about why she left etc, she tells them, they say that yes, they're in love with each other but they're also in love with her. Massive three way sex ensues as they finalize their triad.

 

[Buzzboy]

Lisa pulls away from them - as you said, trying to be a good friend. Realizes that all of her control, all of her work ID is all bs, she's miserable with out them and realizes that she's fallen in love with them both. S & S confront her about why she left etc, she tells them, they say that yes, they're in love with each other but they're also in love with her. Massive three way sex ensues as they finalize their triad.

That's one outcome I considered.

Any idea how Lisa would come to her realization?

 

[Buzzboy]

Anyone? Anyone?

 

[Mrtouf]

What you need to do is show Lisa outside of the penthouse, missing Sarah and Sasha terribly. She picks up the phone to send them a text or call them but then puts it down, resolving to let them be. She watches her favourite TV show and cries because they aren't there. She can't concentrate on her work and notices suddenly how everyone at work seems to have someone special in their lives, even her clients. She goes to the club and they aren't there. She goes to an exhibition and a painting reminds her of something Sasha created.

You say that she likes to be in control, and yet trying to make a break from these two results in her losing control of the things she would usually be in control of. So maybe when she realises just how upset this is making her she goes to see a friend for some comfort. Perhaps it's someone who she used to see a lot of before she met Sarah and Sasha. Sometimes it takes a little outside perspective to clear your head and come to such realisations.

Hope that helps.

 

[Buzzboy]

What you need to do is show Lisa outside of the penthouse, missing Sarah and Sasha terribly. She picks up the phone to send them a text or call them but then puts it down, resolving to let them be. She watches her favourite TV show and cries because they aren't there. She can't concentrate on her work and notices suddenly how everyone at work seems to have someone special in their lives, even her clients. She goes to the club and they aren't there. She goes to an exhibition and a painting reminds her of something Sasha created.

You say that she likes to be in control, and yet trying to make a break from these two results in her losing control of the things she would usually be in control of. So maybe when she realises just how upset this is making her she goes to see a friend for some comfort. Perhaps it's someone who she used to see a lot of before she met Sarah and Sasha. Sometimes it takes a little outside perspective to clear your head and come to such realisations.

Hope that helps.

That's one outcome to consider.

But what about Sasha and Sarah? What's their reaction to all this?

 

[Mrtouf]

If you mean how do they react to being a couple, I'd say that Sasha might feel too tied down by the new relationship, and Sarah might be afraid of commitment. At least that's what the character descriptions seem to imply.

In that case, they may find that although the sex is good, they can't agree on anything outside the bedroom. Lisa, who usually has a level head about these things, isn't around to talk things through, and doesn't answer her messages. So the little diagreements they have snowball into bigger and nastier arguments.

So when Lisa finally decides to go and see them, this conflict could be in full swing. Show the reader that Lisa has the people skills and can gain the trust of both Sasha and Sarah, which she needs in order to mediate their differences.

Maybe it will take longer than one evening of confessions and apologies to make the triangle whole again. It depends on how quickly they realise that they need her and love her as much as she loves and needs them. There's always the chance that they need her then, but not for the next few day, but definitely a week later when they start arguing again.

 

[jeninflorida]

do they share lovers?
do they do men?
do men do them?

I know that would get your attention.

I've been playing with this idea for a lesbian sex story I got from a FFF pictorial from an issue of Penthouse.

These three hot lesbians get together every week for an threeway. The one rule with them is "no relationship, no love, just sex".

The three lesbians are:
Lisa, business woman/power lesbian, dominant, always needs to be in control.

Sarah, flighty, either implusive at one moment or indecisive the next. Sarah and Lisa were the ones who established the "just sex" rule after they both went through bad breakups.

Sasha, DJ and artist, free-spirited, sensual, makes her art by pouring paint on herself naked and rolling on the canvas. After meeting her at a club, Lisa and Sarah includes her in their weekly sex, making it a threeway.

Now the story starts Lisa, Sarah and Sasha having hot and intense sex. Afterwards, Lisa notices how close and friendly Sasha and Sarah have become and thinks they may fall in love. Trying to be a good friend, Lisa decides to put some distance between herself and the potenial lovers, thinking the two will blossom into a couple. At least this the idea.

This is the beginning of the story but I think of the middle and the end.

Anyone have any ideas?

 

[Buzzboy]

To answer your questions, Jen:

do they share lovers? I'm not sure I understand the question (please elaberate) but no.

do they do men? Maybe only Sasha
do men do them? Again...Sasha.

 

[Buzzboy]

Well...?

 

[Buzzboy]

That's it?

No one has any ideas?

 

[IronyMaster]

I like what's been said so far. Why not write a rough draft and post it so that people can critique it?

 

[LindsayRae]

I like what's been said so far. Why not write a rough draft and post it so that people can critique it?

Because there is no outlet at Lit to do so. Not a full rough draft, that is.