DiscipleN
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- Joined
- Oct 25, 2001
- Posts
- 16
Hello,
I am the author of a new submission to the Holiday Contest. Its ratings are not, eh, enthusiastic. According to my account's statistics, it's my worst effot yet! What negative thoughts (okay, you can post positive things too) might people be having regarding this story?
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=31755
I am currently decided that I submitted it to the wrong audience. Perhaps the kind folk here can help me realize that perhaps, it's just crap. (I was dismayed that the formatters removed my scene seperations... alas.)
truly,
DiscipleN
I am the author of a new submission to the Holiday Contest. Its ratings are not, eh, enthusiastic. According to my account's statistics, it's my worst effot yet! What negative thoughts (okay, you can post positive things too) might people be having regarding this story?
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=31755
I am currently decided that I submitted it to the wrong audience. Perhaps the kind folk here can help me realize that perhaps, it's just crap. (I was dismayed that the formatters removed my scene seperations... alas.)
truly,
DiscipleN
