Laying Hardwood Ch 2 in progress

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I am 3000 words into the sequel to Chapter One, by popular demand, hooking Tommy, the MC, with his buddy Seth's sister Hannah, who is slightly older, married and very pregnant.
I find myself uncertain whether or not this one has a Happily Ever After.
what do you guys (and gals) think?
Does she ditch hubby (Aaron) for Tommy? Does she remain with Aaron, but keep Tommy on the side? Do we fast forward a few years to Tommy impregnating her (I expect to put this one in the fetish category- the trolls won't look there, will they?)
Does Aaron find out and blow everything up? Does that enable the HEA?
How does Seth feel about his buddy nailing his married sister? Do we care?
How big a role does Virginia (Ginny), mom to Seth & Hannah & Tommy's erstwhile hook up in chapter 1, play?

 

[lc69hunter]

Very interesting choices of where to go with this. Maybe alternate endings? @silkstockingslover sometimes does that quite well

 

[Rob_Royale]

Some of the best comments I have gotten are in response to a happy ending. People love them. I do too, that's why I write them. I think they are rare enough in real life that it makes people happy to read one.

 

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Some of the best comments I have gotten are in response to a happy ending. People love them. I do too, that's why I write them. I think they are rare enough in real life that it makes people happy to read one.

I agree. Maybe I'm just not sure what HEA means for these 5 characters. So we even care about Seth, Aaron (off stage throughout so far) or Ginny? Is it enough if Tommy and Hannah are happy? Do I just not advert to how that might (or might not) shatter Aaron, who I have established is a neglectful husband?

 

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Anybody?
Buller?

 

[Carnevil9]

I'd have Hannah stay married to Aaron, and fool around with Tommy on a regular basis. Aaron knows all about it, but has other interests, and he is happy to have one of his "chores" taken care of by someone else. Tommy would still have the occasional fling with Ginny - she was lots of fun in the first chapter. Maybe Tommy, Ginny, and Hannah have a threesome, with Ginny giving them all sorts of new sex ideas from her many years of experience. Seth could be clueless about everything as a bit of comic relief.

 

[sirhugs]

I'd have Hannah stay married to Aaron, and fool around with Tommy on a regular basis. Aaron knows all about it, but has other interests, and he is happy to have one of his "chores" taken care of by someone else. Tommy would still have the occasional fling with Ginny - she was lots of fun in the first chapter. Maybe Tommy, Ginny, and Hannah have a threesome, with Ginny giving them all sorts of new sex ideas from her many years of experience. Seth could be clueless about everything as a bit of comic relief.

dang you're good. But do I like Aaron even that much?

 

[Carnevil9]

dang you're good. But do I like Aaron even that much?

If you want to give Aaron a hard time, you could have Tommy and Hannah turn him into their sissy, to use for threesomes when Ginny is asleep or drunk.

But I wouldn't delete him entirely. Without Aaron, Hannah loses her status as "forbidden fruit" and is suddenly much less interesting. At least, that's how I see it.

 

[NegateGivity]

Some of the best comments I have gotten are in response to a happy ending. People love them. I do too, that's why I write them. I think they are rare enough in real life that it makes people happy to read one.

I like happy endings too. But only when they are consistent with the story, and not tacked on. Deus ex machina just cheapens a story. Characters need to earn their happy endings.

 

[sirhugs]

If you want to give Aaron a hard time, you could have Tommy and Hannah turn him into their sissy, to use for threesomes when Ginny is asleep or drunk.

But I wouldn't delete him entirely. Without Aaron, Hannah loses her status as "forbidden fruit" and is suddenly much less interesting. At least, that's how I see it.

Oh, not deleting him entirely. But for now he is "off stage"- out with his buddies while his pregnant wife seduces Tommy.

 

[sirhugs]

Finally done the "fucking in the shower" scene. Seth has arrived. Need at least one more sex scene, and an ending.

 

[sirhugs]

Finally done the "fucking in the shower" scene. Seth has arrived. Need at least one more sex scene, and an ending.

stalled in place.

 

[sirhugs]

stalled in place.

added a short transitional scene, but need to get to more sex... and more importantly, an ending.

 

[UsuallyPresent]

Oh, not deleting him entirely. But for now he is "off stage"- out with his buddies while his pregnant wife seduces Tommy.

What’s he doing with his buddies? I sense options there! Have her stumble on evidence in, perhaps, his laundry, and help him live his preference whilst she lives hers. The sex could be his retelling of what happened, leaving open #3 in the series where they live their convoluted lives together & new stuff blossoms. Maybe Ginnie likes Aaron’s peccadillos? Or Seth does?

 

[sirhugs]

What’s he doing with his buddies? I sense options there! Have her stumble on evidence in, perhaps, his laundry, and help him live his preference whilst she lives hers. The sex could be his retelling of what happened, leaving open #3 in the series where they live their convoluted lives together & new stuff blossoms. Maybe Ginnie likes Aaron’s peccadillos? Or Seth does?

Hmmmm....

 

[UsuallyPresent]

Hmmmm....

I love the smell of cogitation in the morning… it smells like creativity!

 

[sirhugs]

I love the smell of cogitation in the morning… it smells like creativity!

that's the smoke coming out of my ears as the gears in my brain grind against each other.

 

[UsuallyPresent]

that's the smoke coming out of my ears as the gears in my brain grind against each other.

If they’re grinding, two things happen:

1) eventually it all smooths out
2) hey, look - glitter!

 

[sirhugs]

If they’re grinding, two things happen:

1) eventually it all smooths out
2) hey, look - glitter!

as in "and then they.... 'hey, look, a squirrel'..." ?

 

[LupusDei]

as in "and then they.... 'hey, look, a squirrel'..." ?

The corresponding word for 'squirrel' in Latvian is used... somewhat close to how 'pussy' is in English, but more specifically to refer to the hair there. Although phrasing "bald squirrel" could be used and be completely unambiguous. So for me, yes, if you say that, there likely be one to look at indeed.

 

[sirhugs]

Right now my last paragraph reads:
“I’ve never felt so full,” Hannah moaned breathlessly. “I want you to sty the night, hold me in your arms, and fuck my cunt doggy style in the morning. I love wake-up sex the best and Aaron is too afraid of hurting the baby.”

Do I just leave it there, or go on to describe the morning sex?

 

[LupusDei]

Do I just leave it there, or go on to describe the morning sex?

I would say, if you go there you would have to have some last words for the finale of the story, or alternatively a cliffhanger to set up for a never planned sequel, or any other, however minor, plot-like element to justify that scene. But I'm a theoretician, however amateurish.

 

[UsuallyPresent]

Sty the night, or stay? ;}

,Aubrey that’ll be the intro to the next chapter of their lives

 

[sirhugs]

for better or worse, the story is posted:
https://classic.literotica.com/s/laying-hardwood-ch-02

 

[sirhugs]

LH3 is underway (just barely) so open for suggestions as to the "who fucks who how". bear in mind that ch 2 ends with some questions that Carney expects me to answer in ch 3. Can I? We'll see...