Ladies, I have recently posted a new story on BDSM.....Patty Cakes. Since I have no experience in this field, I would like the opinion of those that dig this genre. This is an all female story and the main character is a sub. Do you find it erotic? Any suggestions? Should I continue with this story? Right now my libido is lagging and it's hard to write erotic fiction with a lagging libido.