Ladies, let me paint you a picture

tericloth

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The room is lit only by the DVD playing on the TV mounted on the wall at the foot of the bed. The sound turned off so I can hear my lover when she gets home. I have been waiting for what seems like forever for her arrival. I need her so badly, it has been almost a week since she left on her business trip and we have never been apart this long since we met almost a full year ago.

I softly stroke my breast with my free hand while I think about her. We met at, of all places, a bowling alley. She was in the next lane with a group of friends from work. I was there with my boyfriend at the time. Sitting side by side at the scoring table we started chatting and I felt an instant connection to this beautiful woman. Her eyes were so deep and piercing, it was if she could see directly into me. I was mesmerized every time she looked at me, and I felt an attraction to her soul, long before I realized how gorgeous she was.

We agreed to meet at the bowling alley the following Friday, and I moved in for good one week later. The first time we made love, I knew she was all I would ever want or need in my life. So giving, so strong, so tender, so absolutely sexy, I have never known sex to be so complete.

Thinking about our first time together, I catch my free hand moving between my outstretched legs, my index finger slowly circling my clit.

"Stop it Teri", I tell myself. "You need to wait for her to return".

But it is so hard to wait. I have been preparing for her for hours. A long hot bath with oils and scented lotion. Clean shaven, and wrapped up in a fluffy white towel, I phoned her just before her flight.

"I'll be home in three hours Hun", she said. "I miss you, be ready for me when I get there".

I knew what that meant, and I almost came just thinking about it.

"Come straight home from the airport Lover", I replied. "I will be waiting for you".

I cleaned the house and put fresh sheets on the bed. I thought about wearing my sexy red bra and matching thong, but decided she would probably want me nude upon her arrival.

I look up at the TV and watch the girls as they play. The blonde is face deep in the oriental girl’s crotch, greedily sucking away at her hard little clit. I don't need to hear the sound to know the little Asian one is cumming, I can see it on her face and by the way she is clenching the sheets tightly in her fists on either side of her body. A few minutes later the scene changes to three young girls poolside. Why is it, I wonder, porn always cuts away after the climax and you never get to witness the afterglow? The tender caresses of two lovers, the whispered endearments.

I catch myself stroking my clit again and stop. I am so wet I can feel the juices running down the crack of my ass. I smile to myself, natural lubricant. I hope she notices. But I know she will. She never leaves me wanting, and always knows what I need. Again, it is her eyes. They see right into me.

My legs are tied to the bed posts. There is some slack in the restraints, just enough for me to lift them a little if she wants better access. I look down at the binding on my ankles and smile. She has taught me so much about myself. I never even thought about being tied up before. Now, we play this way often. I love to be totally at her disposal. The feeling of giving her total control. I trust her completely.

My left wrist is tied to the headboard above me. Pulled tight, the restraints have my back arched slightly. This causes my 34B breasts to appear slightly larger than they are. I look down at my nipples, pulled tight and very erect. I can't wait for her to come home and nibble on them. She likes to gently bite them and pull on them with her teeth. I love it when she does this. They are so sensitive; I feel her touch all the way to my clit when she softly chews.

I feel more of my wetness running down between my thighs. Come home Lover I plead to the empty house.

I glance at the nightstand on my right. Everything she may want or need is there. I smile at the collection. Several vibes of differing sizes, two but plugs and some beads, lotions, oils, and a leather crop. Hanging on the wall above the nightstand is her harness. A medium sized purple dildo already inserted into the opening. What will she choose to use tonight I wonder. All of these items, none of them, I catch my breath in anticipation.

I hear the garage door open downstairs. I reach over with my right hand and grab the strap above my head. Quickly I slip my hand through the slipknot as I hear the door open off the kitchen. I pull my arm back, tightening the restraint around my wrist. I wait.

Soon I hear her heels as she climbs the stairs. There are fourteen of them and I silently count each step, my anticipation growing. Now she is in the hall, her steps coming closer, I clench my eyes shut. The footsteps cease and I open my eyes. My lover is standing in the doorway staring at me with those deep, dark eyes, a half smile on her face.

"Welcome home Lover", I say, as she approaches .....
 
It's over 750 words you can put it in the stories section. I think the male readers will like it. It's missing something for me-- too many unnecessary details like "index finger" and "38B" make me think you're not really there.

In fact, those are the kinds of details men seem compelled to add to their writing, and it's a good idea to avoid them if you want people to accept you as a female writer of lesbian stories. :)
 
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It's over 750 words you can put it in the stories section. I think the male readers will like it. It's missing something for me-- too many unnecessary details like "index finger" and "38B" make me think you're not really there.

In fact, those are the kinds of details men seem compelled to add to their writing, and it's a good idea to avoid them if you want people to accept you as a female writer of lesbian stories. :)

Stella,

Why thank you so much for reading my little post and taking the time to count the words. You are so thoughtful.

More importantly, thank you for your unsolicited advice and criticism. I am so, so sorry you did not like my little fantasy, and that it was “missing something” for you. But then again Hun, I never had you in mind when I wrote it.

I am a reader of erotica, not an accomplished writer such as yourself, and therefore thank you for all your “kind” words. Since I am not a writer, I don’t know how to move this to the stories section. You may do so if you like.

As for my use of descriptive terms, such as index finger or my breast size, thank you for pointing out how wrong and male of me that was. If I ever decide to become a published author such as yourself, I will attempt to emulate you and your style. It is so, so much better.

For example in your work "Meeting Robby", although you used the word finger 17 times, you carefully avoided saying index finger. How I marvel at your decision to use “My”, “Another”, or “A third” instead of a specific finger. You are so intelligent. I will surely learn from you.

Just as importantly, you showed me what descriptive words are correct to use. So, I hope you don’t mind if I borrow some of yours. Such as “massive pectorals”, “popped a bicep”, or “I have five what I call heavy arms, that are real strong”. Wow all that and you never once said muscle.

Oh I have so much to learn from you Hun. To use your words "I want to be implanted” with your knowledge and innate ability to quickly reads one woman’s lonely fantasy and decide it is your job – no, your duty - to scold and belittle her.

I would continue with my reply to you Hun, but I’m afraid I am coming dangerously close to your 750 word limit.

Teri
 
Apology excepted. I will chalk it up as a mutual misunderstanding and move on.

I guess my reply was also harsh, so I also apologize.

Teri
 
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