Lactation Story

[Fatwa_Morgana]

I'm thinking of a story about two women who love sucking each others' breast milk. They meet when they are both pregnant, and somehow come to enjoy milking each other. One is older, wiser, plumper; the other is younger, slimmer, more naive. But they love each other, and supply the kind of love that their husbands could never hope to understand.

I'm not sure where to go with this, plot-wise, but I do like the idea of the situation. I think it's very sexy, and very loving. I'll paste a brief excerpt of what I have so far. Any thoughts?.... Morgana...

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Violet gently sucked Allison’s nipple into her mouth. As her lips clamped on the rubbery nub, she tenderly kneaded it between her teeth, applying suction.


Allison, her long blonde hair splayed about her head like a golden halo on the pillow, squirmed in pleasure. Violet could feel the tendons in Allison’s neck tense, and the muscles in her abdomen contract, as she continued to suck and nibble on the rigid bud of her lover’s nipple.


As Allison’s breath came shorter and faster and more ragged, Violet continued to suck, until she tasted the first few drops of Allison’s breast milk. The sweet, tangy fluid leaked out onto Violet’s tongue, and Violet sucked harder and harder, swallowing greedily. She wrapped her small hand around Allison’s ample breast, massaging in time with her sucking, attempting to increase the flow.


Violet heard Allison gasp and moan in pleasure, enjoying being milked as much as Violet was enjoying milking her. Violet continued to suck, massage, and swallow, drinking her fill of her love and her nectar. Her lips and tongue worked the swollen breast flesh, the engorged nipple, loving it and sucking it with emphatic need. After a while, she shifted to Allison’s other breast, and repeated her tender ministrations, sucking down more and more of the nurturing fluid.


Violet was lost in rapturous pleasure; time had no meaning. All that she knew was sucking, and swallowing, and enjoying. She was therefore surprised when Allison suddenly sat up, grabbed her, and threw her on her back on the bed.


“Enough, you little glutton!” Allison laughed. “I’m thirsty too!” Violet smiled up at her lover, knowing the time had come to switch roles. She stared into Allison’s beautiful face, and then watched as it descended toward her own small, pert breasts. She felt Allison’s tongue flick her nipple, her full lips surround it, and her teeth clamp on it……

 

[bisexualsmoker]

I like it. It's very sensual. Very erotic and feminine.
It definitely gives me a 'lift', which is what any good
erotic literature should do.
Your word flow is really nice. Such a nice soft,serene
description.

I especially like the '“Enough, you little glutton!” Allison laughed. “I’m thirsty too!” ' line . It almost seems to imply a switching of a dominant to submissive role. That's definitely a turn on!

Reading it a second time, I like it even more. You definitely have a writing style where successive reads enhance the experience rather than detract because of familiarity.

I only hope you can match the epic plots of your other stories.
I'm sure you will. You have always been good at surprises.

That's really,really nice Morgana. I'm looking forward to the
finished story.

 

[sr71plt]

I'm not into lactation stories, but this one was erotic and you write quite well. I remember thinking a tree hugger story you wrote was very well written and had an interesting concept.

 

[Fatwa_Morgana]

Thank you! I remember you writing a very kind review of my "Tree Hugger" story for the Earth Day contest a year ago. I like writing about women who are somehow estranged from the mainstream, but find ways to make it work. Especially if there is a bit of tragedy in the plot, or at least a dark sort of semi-happy ending.... ... Morgana ...

 

[switch_diana]

I really like the idea. I've just been realizing that lactation is a turn-on for me, and have found very little out there in the way of stories. I'd love to see more.

 

[blaknight]

I'm with you on this one, it can be a very erotic fantasy!

 

[Fatwa_Morgana]

I think what I like about it is that it is about sharing, and giving of oneself. What was inside your lover is now inside you, and vice-versa. It is very intimate....Morgana

 

[Urguycliff]

Maybe add a third

Allison being older, maybe this is a second or third child. Her oldest daughter, now just out of hight school has been breast fed for many years as a child and catches her mother giving her love milk to her young lover. Jealous at first, she joins in to share her mothers honey.