Lack of guts...

[Ravishing]

While I appreciate all comments, and value even the bad ones, it's disheartening to see the following one go nameless. Of cause this is only if they're a Lit person..

This is an UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL description of what can just as easily be described in gross and brutal terms.

The only thing missing for this 'hopeless romantic' is the mutual feeling of his sperm squirting directly into her reproductive organs!

Surely the 'gem' that wrote that if their a Lit, will own up to it.

I'd perhaps let this ride as anon, as thats what it was. But I've had enough of a disterbing time today as it is. With IM's, Bad day of memories, and a damned bad week, that this one's pushed me to ask if it was someone who's a registered Lit member to own up and throw their name under it.

It's not all that much to ask.

 

[samuraislider]

That's the glory of the internet my friend. It gives billions of people the power to be anonymous jerks.

 

[Ravishing]

Which is the disappointing thing.

 

[Guest]

I've gotten a public comment and feedback from *a hopeless romantic*. I bet it's the same person. It was anon for me too.

CM

 

[Scribbleros]

Why don’t you people stop accepting anonymous comments? Is that really difficult?

Cheers,
Sam

 

[Ravishing]

Well, namely because if you read above. Normally comments don't bother me. Someone could on a normal average for me day, tell me my work was so bad that I better get my arse back to kindergarten, and I'd shrug. My writing isn't for everyone. I know this. Have known this all my life.

It's just on this particular day. I happened to end up feeling creeped out by someone's comment via an IM. It was after this, I got the comment anon sent. Which is why I made this post. It just struck me as entirely too coincidental that after I'd blocked this said person, that I got this comment.

But since it's not meant to be, I'm going to let it drop, in the hope I get a peaceful nights sleep, since it's 1:30 am now.

 

[cookiejar]

"Hopeless Romantic" has sent me feedback many times. Most are backhanded compliments, he is a staple around here. You've just hit the bigtime...lol

 

[hiddenself]

I fail to see why this is negative. I read it as a strong compliment of your story.

 

[patricia51]

WOW, I must have hit the bigtime, I got THREE from him in one day! I don't mind anonymous comments and don't imagine anyone else here does. Better anonymous feedback than no feedback at all.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=204232

 

[cookiejar]

I fail to see why this is negative. I read it as a strong compliment of your story.

Hi HS...the one thing I do know about "hopeless romantic" is that he has issues with pregnancy and adulterous affairs. I once wrote a story where he complained because they did not use protection, thus taking the chance for an unwanted pregnancy. Of course he never took in consideration that the couple were married and that they might have wanted a child.

Actually the feedback is indicative of him...I took it to mean he was not pleased by the unprotected sex. Like I said, to me it was a backhanded compliment.

 

[Boxlicker101]

quote:
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This is an UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL description of what can just as easily be described in gross and brutal terms.

The only thing missing for this 'hopeless romantic' is the mutual feeling of his sperm squirting directly into her reproductive organs!


I am puzzled as to what you find so negative about this feedback. He or she is describing the story as an UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL description, which is hardly a putdown. I don't know what the secondline means although I have a few possible ideas. By the way, I never send anon. feedback.

 

[Ravishing]

"Hopeless Romantic" has sent me feedback many times. Most are backhanded compliments, he is a staple around here. You've just hit the bigtime...lol

Ah so thats what that feeling was. Right. I'll remember that next time.

 

[Ravishing]

I fail to see why this is negative. I read it as a strong compliment of your story.

Never meantioned once it was negative. Merely why I was looking. But it seems my questions been answered.

 

[Ravishing]

Hi HS...the one thing I do know about "hopeless romantic" is that he has issues with pregnancy and adulterous affairs. I once wrote a story where he complained because they did not use protection, thus taking the chance for an unwanted pregnancy. Of course he never took in consideration that the couple were married and that they might have wanted a child.

Actually the feedback is indicative of him...I took it to mean he was not pleased by the unprotected sex. Like I said, to me it was a backhanded compliment.

Well. Least we know what tips his boat over, as prefered to floating it, as the saying goes.

 

[patricia51]

Well, I guess the tipping and floating varies from that sometimes. The very last comment to me hoped that the husband in a story of mine would make love to both his wife and her lesbian lover and accidentally get them both pregnant. No it didn't happen.

 

[cookiejar]

He commented on one of my stories a couple months ago...to tell you the truth I miss him. I only wish he wasn't anonymous because I would love to chat with him...I think it would be interesting. I found a few of his comments to me...

Comments: <<knew he was married>> This is the only real flaw in your story as far as this 'hopeless romantic' is concerned!

Comments: <<You missed the feeling of his hot liquids squirting directly into her 'womanhood', reminding her that she was just 'one pill' away from a rather unwanted pregnancy! <<As my eyes closed and I drifted off he whispered , "Just the beginning of our story babe." >> A perfect ending for a 'hopeless romantic'!

Comments: This 'hopeless romantic' has such great difficulty with 'cheating' stories. :-( It would be so easy if they were both unmarried, for him to somehow 'kidnap' her for a magical weekend at this borrowed cabin. Even better yet is that everything that occurs that weekend is a surprise for which she is hopelessly unprepared!

 

[Ravishing]

He commented on one of my stories a couple months ago...to tell you the truth I miss him. I only wish he wasn't anonymous because I would love to chat with him...I think it would be interesting. I found a few of his comments to me...

Comments: <<knew he was married>> This is the only real flaw in your story as far as this 'hopeless romantic' is concerned!

Comments: <<You missed the feeling of his hot liquids squirting directly into her 'womanhood', reminding her that she was just 'one pill' away from a rather unwanted pregnancy! <<As my eyes closed and I drifted off he whispered , "Just the beginning of our story babe." >> A perfect ending for a 'hopeless romantic'!

Comments: This 'hopeless romantic' has such great difficulty with 'cheating' stories. :-( It would be so easy if they were both unmarried, for him to somehow 'kidnap' her for a magical weekend at this borrowed cabin. Even better yet is that everything that occurs that weekend is a surprise for which she is hopelessly unprepared!

I dare say it would be an interesting conversation, I couldn't agree more.

excuse the shortness, it's 2 am, it's too damn hot, the air con isn't doing it's job.... and I had this whine out once already in Shereads's poll on Can't Sleep, Dammit.

*halts the second bitch session*

~ sleepless ravishing ~

 

[MaxSebastian]

What's this whole 'squirting around her insides' deal? No wonder the dude is a 'hopeless' romantic. Sounds like a stalker.

 

[Ravishing]

.... considering what brought me to do this was well, the thing about someone wanting to know whether my hair smelt of vanilla after reading a story of mine, on a bad mood day (not meaning I was mad, ref: bad mood day = utterly depressed) ...... and yes...


*crawls off into bed.*

Here's HOPEING that I do go to sleep. Now all I'll hope for is no nightmares, suddenly colder weather to make the heat bareable for 3:30 am, and .... yeah... I might sleep then.

*sighs*

~ Sleepless Ravishing ~,
.....trying for sleep.

 

[ButterflyLane]

could be worse...

I don't get much in the way of feedback. I'd accept the occasional weirdo if it meant I got more of a response.

 

[jeff29]

I too received quite a long piece of feedback from "hopeless romantic", regarding the second part of one of my stories.

Seriously, it was about six paragraphs long and he had obviously taken some time to think through what he wanted to happen.

Apparently, though, he has a problem with women who happen be well-endowed. lol.

Anyway, I agree, I don't think he was trying to insult the passage from your story.

 

[angela146]

I've heard from him on some of my stories.

I would LOVE to trade emails or PMs with him.

My experience of him is that he LIKES stories that might end in an unwanted pregnancy.

If he would PM me, I would tell him why I sometimes tease about getting pregnant and why an UNWANTED PREGNANCY is IMPOSSIBLE in my stories (at least the ones I've written so far).

But, alas, he is ANONYMOUS... Oh well...

 

[Guest]

 

[angela146]

It's interesting that he seems to have a variety of oppinions on the subject of unwanted pregnancy:

He told me that one of my stories would be SO MUCH STRONGER if I had suggested that the potential pregnancy was unwanted.

Again, if he would come out of the woodwork, I would explain why that isn't possible...

 

[Kirk482002]

Michelle's Last Spanking

I thought you did an excellent job with this story. Very well written and vivid as well. Great writing!

Kirk482002

Kirk19055@aol.com

I just had a new one come out today. Give it glance, if you wish.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=131268