laffalot
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I've had this idea kicking around my head for a few weeks now, and although I'd like to write it, I just don't have the time. So if anyone thinks it's worth tackling, you are welcome to use this idea.
A troubled, self absorbed model/actress/pop star type, (think Lindsey Lohan or Miley Cyrus) is sitting in front of her agent, who also happens to be her brother. He gives her the bad news...his partners in the agency are fed up with her antics and want her gone if she doesn't change drastically. Brother says that the word he has heard being used, is "blacklist". If she doesn't clean up her act, her career will be essentially over.
Brother says something like, "Mom always said that you lacked discipline."
Then, brother tells sister that his wife, Cindy, has found a place nearby that specializes in teaching discipline in four days, like a discipline boot camp.
Sister scoffs and says, "But Cindy hates my guts."
Brother calmly informs sister that Cindy is only trying to help, and if she'll agree to go for four days, he'll make sure that his partners give her another chance. Reluctantly, sister agrees, since she realizes that her career is in jeopardy.
Well folks, this being Literotica, I'm sure that you all know what kind of discipline is dished out. Sister goes to the place and, because she is undisciplined, she signs without reading the documents. For the next four days, this once diva is subjected to all sorts of fiendishness. At this point, there could be tickle torture, BDSM, foot and ass worship, orgasm control, enemas, watersports, anal, oral, etc. Whatever kind of twisted things you can imagine. At some point, even Cindy the sister-in-law could show up to check on the progress. Of course she knew all along what was going to happen, and she so enjoys seeing her arch enemy in humiliating bondage, begging to be allowed to cum.
I was thinking that it could be written as a four part series, where each part is another day at the boot camp. Each day there could be a different person doling out the discipline lessons. At the end of the four day period, sister is a changed person indeed, but is she changed for the better?
So what do you think? Is there anyone who likes this idea and wants to try their hand at writing it?
A troubled, self absorbed model/actress/pop star type, (think Lindsey Lohan or Miley Cyrus) is sitting in front of her agent, who also happens to be her brother. He gives her the bad news...his partners in the agency are fed up with her antics and want her gone if she doesn't change drastically. Brother says that the word he has heard being used, is "blacklist". If she doesn't clean up her act, her career will be essentially over.
Brother says something like, "Mom always said that you lacked discipline."
Then, brother tells sister that his wife, Cindy, has found a place nearby that specializes in teaching discipline in four days, like a discipline boot camp.
Sister scoffs and says, "But Cindy hates my guts."
Brother calmly informs sister that Cindy is only trying to help, and if she'll agree to go for four days, he'll make sure that his partners give her another chance. Reluctantly, sister agrees, since she realizes that her career is in jeopardy.
Well folks, this being Literotica, I'm sure that you all know what kind of discipline is dished out. Sister goes to the place and, because she is undisciplined, she signs without reading the documents. For the next four days, this once diva is subjected to all sorts of fiendishness. At this point, there could be tickle torture, BDSM, foot and ass worship, orgasm control, enemas, watersports, anal, oral, etc. Whatever kind of twisted things you can imagine. At some point, even Cindy the sister-in-law could show up to check on the progress. Of course she knew all along what was going to happen, and she so enjoys seeing her arch enemy in humiliating bondage, begging to be allowed to cum.
I was thinking that it could be written as a four part series, where each part is another day at the boot camp. Each day there could be a different person doling out the discipline lessons. At the end of the four day period, sister is a changed person indeed, but is she changed for the better?
So what do you think? Is there anyone who likes this idea and wants to try their hand at writing it?
