firethrone
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- Joined
- Jan 31, 2002
- Posts
- 11
i had this idea for a sorta spy/rape story. this chick goes on a mission with her male partner to find this underground sex slave ring leader and kill him, but instead gets captured and finds out that her partner works for the guy and she gets raped by both of them. Please people, tell my what you think of the story line and give any hints on how to make it a good story.