bluntforcemama
Aqua Vulva
- Joined
- Nov 11, 2000
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KM, Even though I only have two posted stories on this site, I have others that range about 37 pages.... no where near your feat. I get pretty dang tired of looking at them. But, if you really want suggestions, I suggest sending it to a few different people that you trust with an honest opinion of your work, and see if they can't either see parts where you can cut, or if you should keep going. Just think of the satisfaction you'll get when you're done and it's been posted,... and here come the kudos! Almost everyone is a kudos junkie, no worries there. It should be enough just to know that you've stuck with it over 30 pages, let alone 63! I can't wait for this epic... it's going to redefine the erotic postings. Perhaps you could just cut it into pieces and send it in as it's finished, and the kudos from the earlier parts will spurn you to finish the rest.. ?
thank you! 65 now. Hacked at it last night. I have to go and put more words in through the entire back end. I screwed it all up. My characters stop being themselves and became someone else, bad stuff there.
