chrisfromlondon
Virgin
- Joined
- Nov 13, 2001
- Posts
- 15
Hi there,
This is my latest and I would welcome any comments. It is part of a larger story but still stands on its own I think.
Please let me know how you think I can improve.
Thanks, Chris
This is my latest and I would welcome any comments. It is part of a larger story but still stands on its own I think.
Please let me know how you think I can improve.
Thanks, Chris