Killermuffins story

[sexy-girl]

"Losing Pieces of You"


i dont usually check stories at literotica i've probably read maybe 4 or 5 since i've been here and i can't remember those ... but earlier today i was a bit bored so was surfing around and i saw killermuffins sig line it made me smile because i knew she writes and of course i know her from these boards ... but what made me smile was that this story was a lesbian story i didn't think she wrote that type of story perhaps this was her first one ... i downloaded it to read for later


i was surprised by what i read it was a beautiful story ... a story ... it wasn't just fluff like some of the other lesbian stories i had read on here ... and it was an amazing story a short window into someone's life they felt real ... i think there is something unique and different with lesbian love ... its not the same as male female love ... and killermuffin captured it ... if i didn't know her apart from reading this story i would of guessed she was a lesbian


but she also captured so much more with this story of lost love and moving on and finding someone new and remembering past love ... i cant identify with all those things in my life but i can understand and imagine them from this story ... i nearly cried at the end


the love making scenes were perfect i could identify with them strongly ... them making love on the beach ... where she lays her lover between herself and the warm sand coming from under the beach towel was lovely and they didn't feel the chill of the early evening wind till they are hugging after making love where it suddenly hits them bringing them to there senses ... i enjoyed that the story didn't go into explicate detail of every second of the love making ... when you remember how you made love to someone you dont remember every second you remember moments and that's how this read again making it feel more real ... and sexier


thank you killermuffin ... i did start writing this "fan mail" as a pm but as i wrote it i felt i speaking more to tell everyone how great i thought this story was and i felt a bit silly to write it all directly just to you ... and also i wanted to this post so i could thank all the writers at literotica who maybe i'd actually underestimated ... im sure killermuffin isn't the only talented writer here and perhaps i'll try and check out more of you in future


if this would of been better as a pm though i apologize

 

[KillerMuffin]

Thank you, s-g. That's one of the most beautiful compliments I've ever received in my life.

 

[Svedish_Chef]

Bad muff, writing leso porn!

Bad bad muff

Good writing of course, but bad Muff

 

[KillerMuffin]

You can stick it back in your shorts, Sveetie. I wrote Gay Porn, too. Fairylover.

 

[Svedish_Chef]

The problem with that being you want to be a gay man.

Fudgepacker

 

[sexy-girl]

Thank you, s-g. That's one of the most beautiful compliments I've ever received in my life.

wow i should be thanking you for saying that ... im glad you appreciated my comments


i'd be interested to know was that your first lesbian story ... were you happy with the end result

 

[Svedish_Chef]

She's happy when any of them finish.

Course the whole lesbian thing might have made it a bit more special for her... even if there was no PC and Ollie to write to.

 

[kiwiwolf]

I've been a big fan of KMs writing for a long time. I spent a fair while today reading some of her work and I'm still amazed how she can alter her style to fit the story. From hard and raunchy to tender and erotic. Muffin, my hat's off to you.

Now read and vote people.

 

[KillerMuffin]

Yes, sexy, that was my first lesbian story. It wasn't supposed to be, but she ended being a lesbian.

It's also a second person story. I just wanted to see if I could write a good second person story. I know it can be done, and you usually won't find it here, so I wanted to see if I could actually accomplish it.

I'm rather pleased with the way it came out, though it needs a little rewrite to clean it up.

So, the lesbian part really wasn't all that significant to me. People are people and we all feel and need the same things no matter what flavor we are. The significant part with the point of view.

 

[sexy-girl]

thanks for replying ... perhaps that is why it felt so real because you werent completely set in a mold of saying this has to be a lesbian story


although i still stick by what i said you seemed to tap into female female love pretty well


thanks again

 

[TWB]

KM writes good.









(heh.)

 

[patient1]

I think of it as one of the most romantic stories here.

 

[KillerMuffin]

KM writes good.









(heh.)

*smack*

KM writes well!

You penisdick.