Kidnap in South Suburbia

vierge

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Thread will be closed when I find the first partner to write with. PMS only.

Story outline: The kidnapping and forced submission of one stalked school girl by Master, who unknown to the girl has been talking to her online for months about her desires and fantasies. As she learns, the Master grows to love the slave and even becomes kind to his knew little one.

Thread closes to develop that storyline.

Second storyline: Thread will reopen for the Master’s younger brother ( limo driver ) to snatch away his brother’s keepsake and a battle begins between two masters for one slave they both love for more drama, bondage, and fun! The heart of the little one will be torn between the two as the younger brother is more kind and gentle yet smaller and not as smart as the older.

Character ( school girl ) description:

Name//Kacey
Age//18
Physical//look at my icon
Personality//She is the typical popular cheerleader athlete at her Catholic academy, but when the lights are off, she is dark and quite hateful. She has been taught by getting everything she wants to be selfish and quite sheltered from the real world. Although she has dark fantasies, she has no experience with sex except for a few cocksucking(s). Feisty and clever, she does not give in easily and is most often described by others as a difficult snobby bitch...but hot.

Other Character’s can be made at your leisure, I only ask that the older brother and first Master is over the age of 30 and that the younger brother is under the age of 27.

Sweltering heat bore through the spun gold strands of the little being as she strode along with headphones streaming the hateful music of A Perfect Circle into her pretty head. The hot days of summer pelted down on the seemingly unkempt school girl, who just hours earlier was the picture of prissy perfection: tight ponytail to hold up her flowing mane, white oxford blouse neatly tucked into the deception of a black plaited skirt. The deception being the inches she had rolled it up for it to be shorter. She knew none of the professors at St. Jude’s would mind seeing a little leg between the white stockings just above her knee and the ends of her flouncing skirt. Tossing her shimmering silky locks out of the ponytail, she unbuttoned the top of the collar of the blouse and salivated her dry mouth. A glossy pout mouthed the lyrics of the song as they filtered through her being, bringing out her rebellious nature.

“It’s not like you killed someone...not like you drove the hateful spear into his side...”

She heard nothing but the music and felt her vocal chords buzzing as well as the click of her shiny black Mary Janes on the cement of the sidewalk. She was glad that she wore the little thong today. Every time a slight breeze blew, the wetness of the sweat in between her long tan legs and bare ass cheeks cooled and allowed for sweet release from the terrible 100 degree temperature. Swallowing to wet her esophagus, she shielded her glittering emerlads to look at the cause of the boiling heat, a cloudless sky with a hot glaring sun. Fluttering her long eyelashes, she slid the delicate hand to the backside and touched it to her glistening forehead, becoming weary. She dreaded the walk home especially since the shortcut was through a deserted part of the neighborhood next to her own. About 3 miles from her housing development, she stopped to reach around in the pink backpack for the water bottle, hoping there was still a drop left to soothe her aching stomach and cottonmouth. Licking her full pucker, parched and ready for the wet coolant, she brought the lip of the bottle and tilted her head back to get the last gulp down. Her eyes caught the glimpse of a vehicle moving through the bottom of the watery solution to her thirst and dehydration. Bringing the bottle down, she watched the gleaming black limo move slowly around the bend. She figured it would just pass her by, but it slowed even further as the proximity between them closed. Soon, it stopped alongside her part of the sidewalk and she stood staring at the chauffeur as he climbed out. An man in his thirties, he wore typical attire for a limo driver, black suit, white shirt and black bowtie, polished shoes, no hat though. She always thought limo drivers wore a black cabby hat type. Maybe that was just taxis. She would not know, thank god, she had never had to take one before. She rolled her eyes to the side realizing that he was coming to ask her something. He smiled kindly as she raised a skeptical brow and put off her own smiles for an indifferent scowl.

“Excuse me, Miss, I was wondering if you could tell me where Briar’s Drive is, I just can’t seem to find it and my passenger is getting kinda’ impatient, you know...”

She folded her arms and looked through the tinted windows, too dark to see through it. She sighed and turned away to point down the road to where the road was...
 
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Limo Passenger:

He sits quietly in the back of the limo looking at how her sweat soaked clothing clings to her body and imagining... as he thinks to himself, 'Soon, very soon you'll be with me and be mine and I'll be able to do more than just look at you my little pet.'
 
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ooc: ARGH YOU HAVE TO READ THINGS!! <beats drum>

Okay, I need the first brother to roleplay with right now, so he would be the one watching in the limo until the younger brother got me to get into the limo to help him drive along.....persuading me to get into the back....
 
I reread and edited once again as I understand it now, hope it's right this time. *g
 
She watched the limo driver shake his head, getting frustrated at his incapability to understand.

"I've been down there, I just can't seem to get it right..."

She breathed out exasperated and shifted her tiny bit of weight, shaking her head and tucking a piece of her loose golden strand behind one of her ears nervously. Tossing it away from her wet neck, she felt the sun beating down on her while they stood, it was getting hotter in the few seconds that he was wasting her time..

"Well drive down there again, I don't know what to tell you..."

She walked by him slowly, turning her body as he had been slightly taking up too much of the space of the sidewalk. Sidestepping, she continued on, and she didn't hear anything until about 5 seconds later when she thoguht she had been in the clear. It was still 3 MORE miles in this dead heat. God, why did she walk home today?

"Miss, wait, if you could just....I'd be willing to give you a ride, if you could just direct me to it possibly. I'm sure my passenger wouldn't even mind if you helped yourself to the refreshments, he <i>may</i> be famous but he isn't stingy...."

At the sound of the word <i>famous</i>, her mind seemed to flip a switch and she suddenly became interested at his offer. She was precarious however as he turned to look at him then to the back window of the limo, the sun was shining in and she could see the faint outline of the back of a broad shouldered man. There wasn't really much else she could tell, but who else would be driving around in a big fancy limo.

"Who is it?" She asked taking a step closer and cocking a slender brow up over her right eye, skeptical about this as she was everything else.

"I'm not at liberty to say, but he's one of your crowd's favorites you know, I don't know, it's a liability if I <i>tell</i> you...but as long as you helped us get to Briar's Drive, I'm sure he wouldn't mind repaying the favor...."

She bit the inside of her pretty pink lips and looked preciously at the car, tilting her head like an interested puppy, curious to the hilt. And the sun was still bearing down on the backs of her legs and against her back, making her even hotter. She knew that it might lead to trouble, but he was so nice and the offer was so formidable. She took another step so that she was right next to the limo's door. The chauffeur stepped forward and reached to open the shiny black door, pulling on the door's handle...

"Well?" He asked...
 
From inside the limo

A deep male voice says, "I'd really appreciate your assistance. You can have a nice cold soda, ride in air conditioning and the driver will take you home on me when I've been dropped off."
 
ooc: sorry for the delay, been busy with a few things irl.

roleplay:

Kacey looked into the limo but did not want to lean too far, then biting her lip, she shrugged her shoulders thinking that the offer wasn't too bad and what the hell, she would get some good karma by joining their quest for this road. She leaned in and got in, the door was shut quickly behind her with a loud bang and then the doors were locked, she swallowed a little frightened..
 
Inside the limo:

The man in the back is well dressed and nice looking. His hair is past his collar long and black, black. He has a trimmed jawline beard and moustache and hazel eyes flecked with lot of gold flecks. He's tanned and looks fit.

The divider between the front and back is closed and all of the windows are tinted black, as she saw, so no one can see into the back of the interior.

He leans forward and takes a can of soda from the refrigerator, opens it and hands it to her smiling and saying, "Here you are. Sit back, relax and enjoy the air conditioning and quench your thirst my dear.
"Oh, by the way, my name is Maxmillian Schell. Hello lovely young lady."

He sits and looks at her very pleased, as he knew he would be, and very happy he now has her and that she'll become his sooner than expected after their months of online chatting.
 
"Kacey..." She replied with her name tentatively, fixing her skirt over her knee highs but still realizing she was revealing some lean muscle of her leg as she crossed the right over the left.

She watched him in his peculiar way, seeing as he seemed rather normal but there was definitely something eccentric to the way he talked and in his mannerisms. Kacey took the can of soda and furrowed her brow, remembering the man from online used the same term when referring to her at times. She wondered what he was doing right now, what he was thinking about doing to her. Their descriptions of fantasies they shared in their minds of one another was so exciting that Kacey hid it from everyone she knew. She knew she would never be in a D/s relationship, but it was an exciting thought whenever PhoenixPrime01 actually did give her a little insight into his world.

After realizing she had lost herself in her thoughts, she smiled nervously at the man who was still looking at her, as if waiting for something to happen. She looked at the passing road and realized they would be nearing their destination soon, but the window wasn't down for her to say anything.

She clears her throat in a prissy way and sips on her Coke. "Ahem, shouldn't that window be down, I mean Briar Dr is right here..."

He was driving past it, way too fast to slow down, and Kacey turned back to look at the road through the window, wondering why he hadn't stopped. "HEY YOU PASSED IT!"

She turns to see you getting up from your seat across from her...wide eyes..
 
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Maxmillian:

"Now Kacey there's no need to be upset. After all we know more about each other than most married people know about their partners after years of marriage.
"You know my wants and desires, my wishes and wants just as I know yours, all of yours too.
"You don't recognize Maxmillian, but perhaps my lovely young lady would better understand if I introduce myself as Master Phoenix, or PhoenixPrime my dear."

"It's so wonderful to finally meet and see you in person rather then just on the internet and at Literotica's Pic and story pages where we wrote together and chatted in PM," he says as his eyes lock with and hold hers as he smiles at her.
 
As he started to speak and the car was still moving farther and farther away from where she thought they had been headed, her stomach started to twist with her nerves pushed into full gear. Something was wrong, this wasn’t what was suppose to be happening. She reached to the window and knocked saying, “Hey you passed the...”

That’s when she started listening to Maxmillian talk, hear what he was actually saying. How did he know all of that? She turned her crystallized eyes back to his and widened them in her state of shock. It was Phoenix sitting there, watching her and talking to her. Swallowing hard, she pushed herself as far away as possible clumsily too with her knees together as she sat in the farthest corner to him listening to him speak, the more he talked, the more her stomach churned. She tried to smile back but she was frightened out of her mind.

“Look I know you from online, and-and everything, and I don’t know what you thought but we need to stop this car and just go somewhere where we can talk...with people, where are we going? You should’ve said something beforehand.I-I..”

Her words were coming out all tangled as she realized the farther he took her, the less chance she had of escaping, and she didn’t know what he had planned for her but they had both talked about certain things, she had led him to believe that she was more interested in the lifestyle than she actually was. She wasn’t sure, but she knew this was not how it was supposed to go. She quickly turned.

She shook her head knocking on the window. “Stop the car, STOP THE CAR! I WANT OUT!”

She shouted desperately, turning to smack her hand againstthe window as she cried out for them to stop, kneeling up onto the sit withher back turned to you as she started to scream and raise holy Hell. “LET ME OUT!”

The frantic cries were unlike her, so organized, petite, and little, out of routine for such a bright girl that always had everything figured out so perfectly. Now, she was in a person’s car, who wasn’t quite a stranger, but in vision, he was...
 
Maxmillian/Phoenix:

"Enough!" he thundered his voice drowning out hers and filling the back of the limo.

"You will turn around. You will sit down and you will immediately stop all of this nonsense. And you will do it right now or you'll be punished for disobedience.
"You're now mine, all mine so resign yourself to that lil one.
"Now do as you're told or you'll be spanked until you think your bottom's on fire, and you'll do it then anyway."
 
Startled at first, she swung around upset and angry with him, but she knew what he said was true and she didn't want to be hurt. She did not know how far his madness went. Tears started to form as he yelled at her, realizing that this car wasn't stopping but she didn't want to move forward towards him, she did however stop her shouting and crying out. There was no point. Tears fell down one after another and she sat in that corner, feeling betrayed, not knowing what to do, the horrible feeling that she was about to become someone's plaything. Why had she divulged so much information to a stranger. She covered her face as she cried silently, wishing she had just walked the rest of the way now....Wishing she hadn't said so much, now what was he going to think when she told him that she had just been thinking about these fantasies, that she had no experience, that she was a vir-....virgin.

"Please just let me go, I'm not what you want...Please, you have to let me go..."
 
"You're wrong. You are exactly what I want or you wouldn't be sitting where you are right now little one.
"You will come with me Kacey and stay with me for a period of time I've decided upon and you don't need to know how long so no need asking me.
"If, at the end of that time, you still feel the same way I'll not only let you do, but also deposit enough money in a bank to ensure you of a first class college education for your time with me and you'll know more about yourself when that time is reached than most do about themselves when they die.
"You'll know your wants and needs, your strengths, you'll have learned great patience and how to serve, how to please and how to be a real woman, which most today never learn.
"Is all of the clear to you my lovely little pet?"
 
She was holding her head and shaking it, trying to block out what he was saying. This wasn’t happening. She was dreaming. All of the bad stories about the internet were coming true right before her eyes. She shut them and tried to think, not understanding why this was happening to her. She would be graduating soon, and she even had a prom date and here this was. She wouldn’t deny that she caread for this man and that she was attracted to this man, but the fact was that this was kidnap and stalking. She realized she had never told him exactly about certain things. He had to have found out some way. When he finished, she sat that there thinking, not answering right away. The way he called her pet sent shivers through her, excitement, her body was betraying her as her mind could not handle such a shock to her system. She spoke slowly, her voice shaky and a little higher than normal from it’s stressed and elevation from her tears.

“This isn’t going to work. I’m not saying that I don’t want to stay with you, but this is to soon, this isn’t what I wanted, you can’t just do this, no you have to take me home, YOU HAVE TO!”

Her tone was pleading with him now as she looked up into his face, tear streaked and disheveled, lost completely here inside of his world.
 
Maxmillian/Phoenix:

"Little one you seem to have forgotten our online converstations about the BDSM lifestyle. Master doesn't have to do, little submissive sluts and slave have to do, have to do anything Master tells them to do, do it immediately and do it to the best of their ability. Remember now my pet?
"For example, since we're going to my estate and since it will just be us there and since I wish to truly see you, you may begin to undress for me.
"Do it now pet, or you know what will happen if I have do to it for you, don't you?"
 
She sat there in her tearful gaze shaking her head at his words. She wasn't ready to do that. She held herself tightly and shook her pretty head with a look of innocent defiant in her glossy hues. Her hair was all in a mess, hanging in her gorgeous face, and her lips quivered as she stared at him.

"Take me home."

The words were almost like a demand, but she could think of nothing else to say. She was not going to get naked for him. She did want to get naked. It was just too soon to be giving in to what he wanted. She looked at the window seeing the long stretch of road they were on. She was far away from any place she had ever been.
 
She sat there in her tearful gaze shaking her head at his words. She wasn't ready to do that. She held herself tightly and shook her pretty head with a look of innocent defiant in her glossy hues. Her hair was all in a mess, hanging in her gorgeous face, and her lips quivered as she stared at him.

"Take me home."

The words were almost like a demand, but she could think of nothing else to say. She was not going to get naked for him. She did want to get naked. It was just too soon to be giving in to what he wanted. She looked at the window seeing the long stretch of road they were on. She was far away from any place she had ever been.
 
Maxmillian/Phoenix:

"That's exactly what I'm doing pet. I'm taking you to your new home, the one you'll live in from now on.
"Now you have until I've reached the count of ten to begin undressing yourself for me or I'll do it for you and then punish you for not obeying me as you always must do regardless of what I ask of you," he says in a firm but quiet voice as he looks at you.

"One... Two..."
 
Of course she had to be a brat.

"Three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten!"

She says quickly in defiance, folding her arms not believing that he could hurt her after their long talks into the night, becoming more defiant as the minutes passed. Her jaw centered as they squared off at opposite ends of the limo while she looked into his face simply not going to do what he asked of her. Yes, she needed to be taught a lesson of course, but she did not know that. She only knew that it was her body, her clothes, and all of that trash she had been taught all her life. No one was going to take advantage of her. She would fight him and scream if she had to, but he wasn’t going to take her without any sort of messy words and violence.
 
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Maxmillian/Phoenix:

He sat silently looking at her with a mixture of anger and sadness in his eyes.

He didn't speak again until the limo parked under the portico of a large house built like a spanish hacienda, very thick walls, tall and narrow windows and all.

The back door of the limo is opened and without a word, and ignoring any struggles or words, he gets up, grabs a handfull of hair and uses it to pull her out of the car, up the steps and through the front door into the house.

Kacey doens't get time to look around as he drags her across the foyer and up a the stairs leading to the second floor. At the top of the stairs he pulls her left, down a hallway with several doors off it and pauses just long enough easily holding her as she struggles to free her hair and the uses her hair to almost throw her into the dark room and follows her in closing the door behind him.

There's a click and lights come on revealing a narrow and small room containing a bed bolted to the floor, a cage next to the door fastened to the floor and at the other end of the room a cage tall enough to stand in but not big enough to sit or lay in. Across from the bed is a combination stainless steel commode and basin.
There's just the one door and are no windows at all.

The door closed and locked he walks over, grabs her once again and says, "You brought this on yourself my pet," and he begin ripping and shredding her clothing as it's all pull from her body.
 
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