Katerina's Revisions

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hi Lit Friends, I'm back to let you know I have finished revising a few of my stories. I would love your thoughts on Dancing Angel, Summer's Day, The Cabin Ch. 01... I've added a lot, and in doing so, I hope they are enjoyed by all who read them.

The Cabin Ch. 02 and The Fantasy are still under revisions, but please take a few moments to check out my completed works. I've worked incredibly hard on these pieces, and I would love to share them with you.

Below you will find the link to my members page. Enjoy~

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=201

Hugs Katerina

 

[Guest]

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[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Okay, I'm confused. What kind of reply was that? Am I missing something here?

Kat

 

[sirhugs]

Hi Kat. Will revisit your stories soonest.

Once I'm done pouting about my latest, and editing my next.....

 

[Guest]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Gay.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Okay, I asked...Gay, that says a lot. I'm beginning to think asking for feedback is not a good thing.

Sirhugs, you always support me. Thank you friend.



Kat

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Okay, I asked...Gay, that says a lot. I'm beginning to think asking for feedback is not a good thing.

Sirhugs, you always support me. Thank you friend.



Kat

Ignore the Chill behind the curtain, it is never wrong to ask for feedback. Ask away.

~A~

 

[Guest]

Okay, I asked...Gay, that says a lot. I'm beginning to think asking for feedback is not a good thing.

Why?

Think, children.

Think!

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Sorry for the ranting below, I had a frustrating moment.

Kat

 

[sirhugs]

How difficult can this be? All I'm simply asking for a response. Feedback, something! Is this to much to ask for? I get really frustrated. This is the second thread I've posted regarding my writings and it seems I'm rarely responded too. I find myself wondering why I work so hard trying to please others when no one really seems to care. And, why do I bother even posting a thread?

My newest story, Dancing Angel did get some very positive feedback, but only when it was in the new stories section. Since then, I've dissapeared once again. I hate dissapearing. I wanna be seen! Okay, I'm whining, but hell, its my thread, let me whine. I just like to be taken seriously. I take my writing seriously. It'd be really nice to actually get real responses, other than a big F, and then finding my thread vearing into a different direction. Okay, I'd best go...I've said my piece.

Katerina

how about a new story, Kat?

That might get more readers to respond. I thought Angel deserved a sequel, or you could do a fresh idea.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hey Sirhugs, you're right, new stories are always a good thing. And, I do have a new story in the works, but it'll take time. I'm not a fast writer, I can't whip up new stories as fast as some people can. But I am proud of my current stories, and I guess I just want to share them, that's all. My revisions on Cabin and Summers were extensive, and I suppose I was just excited, hoping for feedback.

I know everyone here feels the same about their work too. We just work so hard and I guess we just like some kind of recognition. I guess I'm just going about it the wrong way.

Hugs Kat

 

[sirhugs]

Hey Sirhugs, you're right, new stories are always a good thing. And, I do have a new story in the works, but it'll take time. I'm not a fast writer, I can't whip up new stories as fast as some people can. But I am proud of my current stories, and I guess I just want to share them, that's all. My revisions on Cabin and Summers were extensive, and I suppose I was just excited, hoping for feedback.

I know everyone here feels the same about their work too. We just work so hard and I guess we just like some kind of recognition. I guess I'm just going about it the wrong way.

Hugs Kat

there is no wrong way
did you turn public comments on?

did you try "pimping" on threads that match the stories themes?

 

[hiddenself]

How difficult can this be? All I'm simply asking for is a response. Feedback, something! Is this to much to ask for?
Katerina

I suspect you might take this the wrong way but... It would help if:

1. You viewed everyone in context of his/her Lit personna. CV is known for his trolling posts -- you just try to understand what point he is trying to make in his convoluted way (if there is one -- sometimes there isn't, as far as I can tell).

2. You were a bit less overbearing in both your requests and responses to people.

3. You are gracious to anyone who comments (even if you think their view is crap). After all, you ARE asking for a favor, yet you seem to think you are entitled to it!

4. If all you want is "support" or glowing reviews (as some of your posts seem to imply), some of us will simply take a pass.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Points taken Hiddenself. Thankyou. Kat

 

[wicked woman]

Kat...

I read your Dancing Angel...first of all the red "H" is feedback...positive feedback.

You have a knack for describing from the narrator's perspective...every inch of what she's thinking and feeling. Personally I prefer a bit more dialogue but appreciate it would have been difficult considering your plot. Enjoyed it.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

wicked woman, thanks so much for taking the time to read Angel, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think you're right regarding dialogue, it's a huge part of a story. In this story, there is various parts where Cassie is alone, so she isn't conversing. Thoughts and feelings are portrayed more. But...when the girls get together, then the dialogue comes more into play. Again, thank you so much. I appreciate your time.

Abstruse and sirhugs, thanks for your thoughts and responses.

Hugs Kat