Just wrote my first story and need a mentor

[NiteRidder]

Just wrote my first story and have not posted it yet. So far only had one friend look at it and would Would love to have one of you authors read it and give me some comments. Please.

 

[Quint]

NR,

Though I can't guarantee any more luck there than here, the standard place to ask for critique is on the Story Feedback board. It's just etiquette. When you get there, they will tell you to critique if you want to be critiqued. Best of luck.

 

[NiteRidder]

Thanks

Thanks for the advice Quint appreciate it .

NiteRidder

 

[Weird Harold]

Re: Thanks

Thanks for the advice Quint appreciate it .

NiteRidder

The Story Feedback forum is more intended for comments after you post your story.

For help before posting there's the Volunteer Editor's program:
http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/voled_stor.shtml

(If you have problems with volunteer editor's not responding to requests -- give them a week or so, some are very busy -- let Laurel know so she can update the list.)