nosoup4crr
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Haven't had a chance to edit. Feedback is appreciated. I take criticism like a champ.
Honeysuckle Twilight
real magic exists
in dandelion breezes,
fall carnivals, longer kisses goodnight—
In slowing at my backdoor,
Inhaling humid honeysuckle twilight,
the humming ghosts of dead sons
pleading under orange streetlight constellations—
"keep the door closed, go
out and play."
*Didn't see the "poetry under construction" thread until after I made this one, and I can't figure out how to delete it. Lesson learned.
Honeysuckle Twilight
real magic exists
in dandelion breezes,
fall carnivals, longer kisses goodnight—
In slowing at my backdoor,
Inhaling humid honeysuckle twilight,
the humming ghosts of dead sons
pleading under orange streetlight constellations—
"keep the door closed, go
out and play."
*Didn't see the "poetry under construction" thread until after I made this one, and I can't figure out how to delete it. Lesson learned.
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