mrwizard67
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I have a two part story here called The Hotel Hooker. I would like some reader feedback on particular thing. By the end of part two do you, the reader, feel that Sue and Tim are just having sex, or do you feel that something more is happening.
I know the direction that I had intended it to go, but sometimes stories seem to take on a life of there own, and this one changed a great deal from the first concept.
Anyway, I would be greatful for any insight that you have to offer.
Here is Hotel Hooker?2
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=9329
[Edited by mrwizard67 on 03-02-2001 at 09:01 PM]
I know the direction that I had intended it to go, but sometimes stories seem to take on a life of there own, and this one changed a great deal from the first concept.
Anyway, I would be greatful for any insight that you have to offer.
Here is Hotel Hooker?2
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=9329
[Edited by mrwizard67 on 03-02-2001 at 09:01 PM]
