Just not sure where this will go

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Have told this true story few times so just help me out I was very good friends with a land agent who sold my house after I split from my wife. He was so helpful during the ordeal that I found him to be a good friend.
I was invited around to his house a few times for dinner, met his lovely friendly wife and we all seemed to hit it off. I was in my late 20s and they were both mid to late 50s . This friendship lasted for a couple of months ,then we all moved on.
I was doing night clubs with my mates , not really looking for a steady hook up just out having fun.(not much sex either}
I was at our sports club one weekend,as we won a finals match and who was there?
It was my good friend Max my land agent (not there real names ok) with Barb She was little under the weather ,very handy and flirting.
So lets get to the real bit,,, We are at there house drinking Burbon and listening to loud rock music. Max is telling her to let herself go,give me a little show, just like she promised him if they saw me again.
Let me now explain my vision Barb is rather large,great breasts and very plump arse that has always got me horny looking at clips.She leaves the room ,saying coffee is coming. So its quite awhile till she reappears,coffees n liqueurs but what she had on really was a hard on.The white satin night gown open in front with white corset holding up her large breasts and french knickers.
We are drinking coffees Barb is now in my face with breasts and red lips giving me the come on. Max finally comes over and slides down my zipper and says to her "look its ready to go baby" She then gives me a tongue in my mouth kiss then pulls the leg of her knickers aside and slips my raging hard on inside her hot slippery vagina. Its now my best screw ever,the heat is unreal and my orgasm was shattering but not long enough. Barb said "alls good we can now train you so I will be very happy with that great cock of yours ok"
This is my dilemma ,,should I continue with this couple, who are way alder than me or just say ,thank you foir a great night?????
 
Choose a direction or two

Are you wanting to write it for reality or fantasy? What did you do? Go back for seconds or the occasional aching ball release? Go home? Continued it as her trained sex slave?

Are you trying to rewrite history as an opportunity missed? Are you planning on getting involved with the husband next...or at the same time?

The story is yours and you're basing it on history. Every movie and many books that start that way often goes into creative license. You said she was 50, but if knocked 10 years off that you could have knocked her up. It might be a surprise or it might be what she planned.

There are many ways to go with this opening.
 
Write the story as you wish, with an ending you want, not necessarily the IRL (In Real Life) conclusion. Do you and the old man spit-roast the old lady?

Take your framework of history and embellish it so it arouses yourself and your readers. LIT audiences seek entertainment, not journalism, although many stories here ARE based on reality. Some realities must be toned-down to be believable. Fact IS weirder than fiction.
 
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