JoiseyMadison
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- Nov 22, 2005
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Ok I'm sure this has happened to plenty of folks out there but its a first for me. I have gotten nasty feedback before and I have gotten people who tell me they hate me and my stories for no reason. I usually smile and wave. But this chick...Well I am assuming its a woman or a really emasculated male who has NOTHING better to do than insert themselves into a story and then complain bitterly when it doesn't go their way.
I have a feeling all the emails I have gotten re: this story (FOR THE SAKE OF AN EMPIRE) about the whole lack of a relationship between Portia and Marcus, are from the same person. The tone and feel are the same. In the first three emails, "she" complained that though the story was "good" she really wanted Marcus and Portia togetehr and to have a happy ending. Now, anyone who has read the first two chapters of this saga KNOWS there can never be that fairytale ending between them. Portia's a bitch, plain and simple. She can be vulnerable and she can love but she always does both in a twisted way. She had her own father murdered and tried to kill Marcus. He doesnt trust her and now she's tried to knock herself up with his kid while he was asleep. (Yea I know some As the World turns stuff heh) so HOW can there be anything but animosity there?
Ok so after those three emails she writes again (always annonymously) and says she doesnt like the whole Mara storyline because he doesnt have chemistry with her and he, and I quote "BELONGS to Portia."
I can't answer annonymous emails obviously, so I continue my story and I get another annonymous email saying "You're ruining everything between Portia and Marcus on purpose. You don't want them together." (Is anyone else totally remembering the poor bunny in Fatal Attraction)
Didn't hear from "her" for awhile after I said screw it and decided to stop writing the story here and took it to another site where its doing well. But now she's back I suppose because I posted two new chapters on Lit. Below is the newest gripe...
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
Ok the last chp. I was alittle disappointed. U put portia and marcus 2gthr for 1nite. But he wasn evn concious of it which kindof defeats the purpose. I want 2c him wit her willingly.
Defeats the purpose? Its a STORY. It totally FITS the purpose illustrating that Portia is a crazy, brilliant and ambitious woman capable of anything. She is NOT Cinderella or Snow White and she just can't have the happy ending. Just the way she's created. Like Jessica Rabbit said, she's not bad, she's just made (drawn) that way.
ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love that people get into the story but come on now. It's FICTION!
-steps of her little soapbox and passes it to the next person-
I have a feeling all the emails I have gotten re: this story (FOR THE SAKE OF AN EMPIRE) about the whole lack of a relationship between Portia and Marcus, are from the same person. The tone and feel are the same. In the first three emails, "she" complained that though the story was "good" she really wanted Marcus and Portia togetehr and to have a happy ending. Now, anyone who has read the first two chapters of this saga KNOWS there can never be that fairytale ending between them. Portia's a bitch, plain and simple. She can be vulnerable and she can love but she always does both in a twisted way. She had her own father murdered and tried to kill Marcus. He doesnt trust her and now she's tried to knock herself up with his kid while he was asleep. (Yea I know some As the World turns stuff heh) so HOW can there be anything but animosity there?
Ok so after those three emails she writes again (always annonymously) and says she doesnt like the whole Mara storyline because he doesnt have chemistry with her and he, and I quote "BELONGS to Portia."
I can't answer annonymous emails obviously, so I continue my story and I get another annonymous email saying "You're ruining everything between Portia and Marcus on purpose. You don't want them together." (Is anyone else totally remembering the poor bunny in Fatal Attraction)
Didn't hear from "her" for awhile after I said screw it and decided to stop writing the story here and took it to another site where its doing well. But now she's back I suppose because I posted two new chapters on Lit. Below is the newest gripe...
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
Ok the last chp. I was alittle disappointed. U put portia and marcus 2gthr for 1nite. But he wasn evn concious of it which kindof defeats the purpose. I want 2c him wit her willingly.
Defeats the purpose? Its a STORY. It totally FITS the purpose illustrating that Portia is a crazy, brilliant and ambitious woman capable of anything. She is NOT Cinderella or Snow White and she just can't have the happy ending. Just the way she's created. Like Jessica Rabbit said, she's not bad, she's just made (drawn) that way.
ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love that people get into the story but come on now. It's FICTION!
-steps of her little soapbox and passes it to the next person-