Just found out the link didn't work...

[p_p_man]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12243


This one's OK...


So if you'd like to give feedback I'd be grateful and the same condition holds...don't hold back any punches!

Ta

 

[p_p_man]

No feedback at all!!

...was it that bad?

 

[p_p_man]

I've checked and yep...

...I'm in the right thread.

Still no feedback.

So let's try something different...tell me why I'm not getting any?

Out of over 20 views somebody must have something to say!

 

[Merelan]

Okay, read the story. Was funny. Put's a whole new meaning to the story. Like the twist at the end. So this is the truth of it?
Now it makes more sense.

A little hard to follow in parts, but simply reread them till I understood.

Thank you for pointing this out.

Any other "truths" to share with us?

 

[p_p_man]

Thanks Merelan

I was beginning to think my post was invisible...

Can you tell me the difficult bits to understand?

It was my first attempt at humour and I found it hard going (not so easy to write as I thought it would be).

Now that I know my posts aren't invisible I'll post another one in a minute...

 

[p_p_man]

Sending this up for a really final go...