Just finished first story!

[BlackSatin]

(I apologize in advance if I'm posting this in the wrong discussion forum, let me know if this should go somewhere else)

I just wrote my first story and am pretty proud of my effort. I can't believe how much fun it was to write ... and can't wait to pen my second.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=132822

Please feel free to criticize or add general comments!

thanks in advance

BlackSatin

 

[Guest]

Hi BlackSatin, and welcome to the Authors' Hangout.

Of course, you are free to post a link to your story here, you're an author afterall.

However, if it is feedback you are looking for, you might want to put exactly the same post in the Story Feedback forum. You'll probably get more of a response there, for actual feedback, that's all. Not saying there won't be any here, though!

Congrats on getting your first story posted, it is a very big deal - for anyone. May this be the first of many.

Lou

 

[Guest]

 

[pop_54]

Lo friend

Hello black satin, welcome to the high table Well done on your story, I must take a look later.

The others have just about summed things up, but there are other things acceptable as payment of dues, Umm... soiled panties will do nicely, I see you could be a collector of such items

Oh... and if you happen to come upon a sheep with 'Blodwyn' on her name tag, that one's mine.

MG will answer 'THE' question later I've no doubt, but as Lime says, please at pain of death, don't shorten Svenska's name. The blood and guts takes so long to clean up.

See you later hopefully.

pops

 

[damppanties]

Re: Lo friend

See you later hopefully.

Hehehe.

Hi BlackSatin, like your nick and congrats on the first story.

 

[sailorm72003]

Hi BlackSatin, welcome.
It's always fun when a story is posted, congrats.

Sailor