Just Another Picnic Phantasy...or is it???

Pni4UrThghts

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Imagine driving along with no cares in the world. All is left behind while we drive to the destination of the unknown. Few essentials pack in the trunk such as a blanket and picnic basket with bottle of chilled champagne and just 2 wine glasses. Some fruit and chocolate sauce to use what ever we decide to use it for. A radio for soft sexy love making music. We have no particuliar destination and no special time for return. Just driving free!
As we are driving we come upon a very secluded and most romantic sight we had ever seen. It was breathinglay beautiful with the view of miles of open waters and rocks. As we walk along the shoreline we find this out of the way cove that has a warm spring waterfalls, that has a secret cave just under the falls. We decided that this would be the perfect spot to stop and have our picnic. As I spread the blanket opned you took out the bottle of champange and popped the cork with a loud bang and poured us each a glass and I turn the radio on. With the sweet sounds of the music in the back ground you scoop me up in your arms like never before.
It was like being a teenager all over again. I playfully pull away from you and stand under the warm fresh water falls, undressing as you watch me teasingly toss my clothes off one peice at a time.
First I unbutton my blouse and toss it at you to show off the new lacey bra, then I sdlowly turn around to slip off my skirt that has now become sticking to my body and i wiggley my butt playfully at you as I take it off. And now you see the matching panties that are very low bikini cut style, but surpriseingly you find out when I bend over that the underwears are also crotchless. As I tossed my skirt your way, I motion for you to join me under the falls as I am slowly rubbing the water drops against my bare skin. You disrobe your closthes as you saunterly tease me with your body swaying to the music in the back ground.
You finaly get to me and take me in your arms and start tenderly kissing my naked neck and holded me tightly, but ever so tenderly. You pull me closer as I start to softly kiss your chest and neck area with soft nibble to your earlobes. You pull my head back gently grabbling it by my hair and pull my lips to yours. The kiss was so soft and gentle at first but didnt take long to get heated long and hard. Its teasing the hell out of you knowing I still havent allowed you to take off my bra and panties yet. And your there totaly and utterly naked. You are trying your best to get them off me and I softly whisper to you that the only way they will come off is if you use your teeth to remove them.
So I turn around and you cheated, you got frustrated undoing the bra with your teeth so you used your fingers to undo it, as you softly kiss the back of my neck and shoulders all the time whispering sweet nothings slowly working your way down my back to my panties. As you get to them you realized that they are edible as well as crotchless. You turn me round and look up into my eyes with such a teaslingy soft love filled look in your eyes. You work your way back to a standing position by kissing and softly rubbing my skin. You've found your way to my rock hard nipples and start to kiss and nibble tenderly. By this time, what was suppose to be my seduction of you, your have turned the tables and have me almost begging you to make sweet tender love to me right there in the waterfalls. You pull me close and lift me up into your arms so that I am in a strattling position as we move up against the wall to keep from falling down. Your solid hard cock slowly enters me with the edible underwear still on me (minus a few bites you took out while you were down there). You start pumping in and out slowly, as I am trying to hold back my first overwhelming explosive waves of the orgasm your bringing me full tilt. I'm clawing your back and kissing you so hot and heavy now even being under the water falls we can't get cooled down.
But just as I am geting really heated enough to scream out in ecstasy you put me down and pull away from me. You scoop me up into your arms and kissing me gently as you lay me on the blanket. But your attempt to reenter me with me on my back was foiled, as I trickly rolled you over on your back. I climb on your lap before you even had a chance to realize that you are at my mercy now. As our bodies are rejoined you moan out loud, because the passion is just getting to much for you to handle as I being just toyingly roll your cock around inside me and I grip tighter with my pussy muscles. Your eyes are opened and your watching me bite my lip as you being rolling my nipples around in your finger tips. I arch my back far back with my head even further back as the the passion and heat that you left me in returns with the force of a thousand horses runs throughout my body. I am cumming and the moans and screams seem to be coming from a far off place although I know they are coming from me. I back off just alittle and slowly start kissing your chest and neck as I lean forward and press my nipples against your body as we passionatley kiss each other.
You make your move and roll me gently back over to my back and once again take control. You lean over me like your going to reenter my eagerly awaiting pussy, but instead you softy kiss my belly as you make your way back down to the sticky edible panites and finish eating them off, teasing me with your tongue at every chance. Now that the panites are no longer an issue, you start playing with my juicy hot pussy with your fore finger while you work your way down kissing my thighs on your way to my ankles. God you are driving me crazy, my ankles are sending electrical shocks throughout my body as you gently kiss and lick them while playing with my pussy.
STOP, I can't take any more of this teasing, I am begging you to make make hot steaming love to me. You have no choice but to work your way back up as I am now pulling you by the hair back to face me. You gently rub my clit with your cock as you tease me before placing your stiff penis back into my wet hot awaiting pussy. You start the pace of moving back and forth slowly at first but by now you are so worked up with watching me play with my tits as you make sweet love to me, you start moving faster, hotter and harder, inside me. The heat is getting so thick from the hot passionate love we are making that its almost getting to hot to even breath.
Just when I can't take it anymore, my body is in uncontrollable shakes and quivers and my pussy muscles are gripping you inside me tighter and tighter. Harder and faster your pace quickens and as we explode together in orgasmic convulsions, I'm clawing your back and your gently pulling my hair as I arch my back even closer to you, so that your going even deeper inside making the orgasim seem to last forever. I can't seem to catch my breath, the emotions that is coming from my body seems like a volcano erupting. The passion has filled the cave with the smell of sex and you are slowling you pace down, trying to catch your breath as well.
You finaly decided to roll off me, most unwillingly I might add and pulled me into your arms as we just cuddle and lay there for a few moments to regather some kind of composer. as our bodies try to still themselves as they are still realing from the pleasure they just experienced. We each fall alseep unintentionaly, while snuggling in each other arms.
Later toward night fall is when you awake me by just sloftly carressing my skin and offering me a strawberry covered in chocolate.
We return to the falls and just rub each others bodily clean with the rushing waves of water falling warmly over our naked bodies. As we dry each other off and pack up everything to return unwantingly to the reality of world, we playfully are getting each other hot again. When we finaly make our way back to where the car is parked, our bodies are already screaming to become one again.
But...... The ride home is a totaly different story for another time.
 
Damn Good Stuff

You write very well. I love to read from the perspective of a woman. I try to write that once in a while, but after reading your writing I realize I might as well try to describe what red tastes like. You got my blood flowing and I guess that is what a writer wants to do, excite and stimulate his or her reader. Especially when you are writing erotic fiction.

You could post your story beginnings on Chyoo and post links here so other people can add to them.

I would like to read more.

:D
 
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