John Robert's Poetry thread...lines for the love lorned witty and lusty

John Roberts

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It was bound to happen, I have been leaving poetry all over the place....may as well start a thread........face it crude and rude is out...<laughing> it's all your fault Woodie! Feel free to contribute, I will be posting when poetry takes me.....I hope you do to.

I want to touch and be touched
comfort the sick, a cool drink on a hot day
Hold someone tightly and see as love succors
their love lorned heart harried by tumulteous life
a drop lost in the stormy sea

I want to hear a soft voice in the dark
singing of passion and love
sweet with a lover's pleasure and delight
whispers touching my soul with light
a lovely symphony of the night

I want to see my lover's skin
flushed with want, desire and hunger within
see her soul shining bright from love filled eyes
gentle curves of her form gracing my vision
filling my heart with her beauty





Durn....still rough....more work
 
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Good thread idea, JR. Some of us occasionally post such things on the Silly Romantic thread, but this may well be a more appropriate place to post original work.

May just have to get out the old quill pen and take a whack at something new myself. ;)
 
midwestyankee said:
Good thread idea, JR. Some of us occasionally post such things on the Silly Romantic thread, but this may well be a more appropriate place to post original work.

May just have to get out the old quill pen and take a whack at something new myself. ;)

Please do....we will keep an open forum to allow flexibility of creativity.....I look forward to your writing.:)
 
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Alone with you in our parallel world
The stars shine with your smile,
The sun warms with your eyes
The dawn breaks with your laugh.

Time travels quietly with you
As minutes feed us like hours
And seconds of your sighs
Last a week in fond recall.

Heights that we climb hand in hand,
Virtual peaks of sound and desire,
The horizon is of an eternity
We build and dream alike.
 
midwestyankee said:
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Alone with you in our parallel world
The stars shine with your smile,
The sun warms with your eyes
The dawn breaks with your laugh.

Time travels quietly with you
As minutes feed us like hours
And seconds of your sighs
Last a week in fond recall.

Heights that we climb hand in hand,
Virtual peaks of sound and desire,
The horizon is of an eternity
We build and dream alike.

Thanks midwestyankee, very nice.:)
 
Thank you for the thread John Roberts. I like poetry, but I really can't write it.
 
Missingmeds said:
Thank you for the thread John Roberts. I like poetry, but I really can't write it.
Hi Missingmeds:rose: Thank you for being here.
Sometimes I can....but I am far from Blue Dolphins ability........
If you can feel it you can write it.....it just takes pratice of which lately I seem to be lacking....
 
you know I have met more Ohio women that spark me than in any other state........I am not shorting you women from other areas.....it just seems Ohio is full of delightful women......:heart: :heart:
 
Originally posted by midwestyankee
You're quite welcome. With some luck, the inspiration for this will find it here.


Oh yankee thats beats Dr. Seuss anyday..I hope your inspiration knows what a lucky person she is ....:kiss:
 
Durn! DLL your moving sig Avatar has some nice cuban motion.......very nice.:heart:

Since my opening poem lacks a muse I will post this one..

Why not reach out to that which touches my heart
why not expose my soul even though it burns me
For it is only a matter of time until the dusk of dawn
will reveal the lover that awaits the spring
and the warmth of the rising sun.
 
Lilacs fragrance in morning,
Jasmine in the evening air,
New Moon's shining beams
Tiny stars sparkling light,
Nightingale’s loves song,
Isolated cove found on
A paradise isle ...
Sensations delightful
Beauty in her eyes of blue
And her wonderful smile
 
It was a warm summer night
Whispering she said "our love feels so right,"
her soft voice sounds so sweet
no other words could lift me to such heights,
No other words could make my soul so light.
"Our love feels so right" making us complete.
Her whispered words seduced me in the night
Smiling, I knew this love was right
The night we first came to meet
And our souls gave up their fight
As we quenched our thirst in bliss
that warm summer night.
 
biggbear8 said:
It was a warm summer night
Whispering she said "our love feels so right,"
her soft voice sounds so sweet
no other words could lift me to such heights,
No other words could make my soul so light.
"Our love feels so right" making us complete.
Her whispered words seduced me in the night
Smiling, I knew this love was right
The night we first came to meet
And our souls gave up their fight
As we quenched our thirst in bliss
that warm summer night.

Thanks biggbear,
The second one speaks to me the most, tis my favorite.:)
 
For When You Smile

For when you smile I can see next year,
As days flow past, burbling on their way
To the sea of time, we cool our feet
And drink to slake our thirst for love.

For when you sigh I can hear tomorrow
Singing in a virgin's flowered tone;
And each note tells of loss and pain
Yet hope for new love once again.

For when you dance I can feel tonight
Shimmering in a radiant wave;
You rise with the air and never fall,
You share your joy with all who see.

For when you kiss I know today
Carries us in friendly arms
That lift and guide and offer
Two souls a life as one.
 
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midwestyankee said:
For When You Smile

For when you smile I can see next year,
As days flow past, burbling on their way
To the sea of time, we cool our feet
And drink to slake our thirst for love.

For when you sigh I can hear tomorrow
Singing in a virgin's flowered tone;
And each note tells of loss and pain
Yet hope for new love once again.

For when you dance I can feel tonight
Shimmering in a radiant wave;
You rise with the air and never fall,
Your joy you share withh all who see.

For when you kiss I know today
Carries us in friendly arms
That lift and guide and offer
Two souls a life as one.

Very Nice:)
 
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