Joan of arc. Princess warrior

[loquere]

I'm thinking of a medieval story,

-A King has one daughter, he gets sick and there is an impending war. Even though he orders her not to go. She eventualy feels its her devine duty to lead the army into battle and ignores her fathers wish. She cuts jer beaitifull silky hair and charges the battle field with shimmering armor.

-She starts by winning the war but the other side soon starts to gain ground and starts taking her land and defenses. During the battle her dad dies and she becomes Queen, without knowing it.

-She meets with enemy king, and he makes an offer. That she be his puppet, after an internal battle she agrees to let him bed her to save her people.

-in a tent in the middle of the battle field she has sex with him, but slits his throat during the intercourse. then wins the battle, and soon has his son the prince declaring vengeance on her.

 

[LadyVer]

I'm thinking of a medieval story,

-A King has one daughter, he gets sick and there is an impending war. Even though he orders her not to go. She eventualy feels its her devine duty to lead the army into battle and ignores her fathers wish. She cuts jer beaitifull silky hair and charges the battle field with shimmering armor.

-She starts by winning the war but the other side soon starts to gain ground and starts taking her land and defenses. During the battle her dad dies and she becomes Queen, without knowing it.

-She meets with enemy king, and he makes an offer. That she be his puppet, after an internal battle she agrees to let him bed her to save her people.

-in a tent in the middle of the battle field she has sex with him, but slits his throat during the intercourse. then wins the battle, and soon has his son the prince declaring vengeance on her.

It had possibilities til she slit his throat.

 

[loquere]

It had possibilities til she slit his throat.

Why shouldn't she slit her blackmailers throat?

 

[LadyVer]

Why shouldn't she slit her blackmailers throat?

This was the Middle Ages. Men ruled. She can't save her people if she's killed for assassinating the ruler who was going to help her. Besides, who wants to read a porn story where a throat gets slit at the end. What if she talks him into understanding what he would get by helping her. And he shows her what she would get on a frequent basis if she didn't slit his throat. You know, like sex. Hot sex.

 

[loquere]

This was the Middle Ages. Men ruled. She can't save her people if she's killed for assassinating the ruler who was going to help her. Besides, who wants to read a porn story where a throat gets slit at the end. What if she talks him into understanding what he would get by helping her. And he shows her what she would get on a frequent basis if she didn't slit his throat. You know, like sex. Hot sex.

Alm no, I can't believe a woman would argue that. She's a queen since her dad dies now, she has her own sovereignty to defend. She isn't a submissive or slave. There would be more sex, that's the end of the thought. She would probably fuck his son. But her as the dominant.


She can save her people by killing him, because the opposition strategist is dead. It gives her units an advantage to win. Because there disoriented.


Once again. She would probably fuck his son, the prince. But her as the dominant.

 

[LadyVer]

Alm no, I can't believe a woman would argue that. She's a queen since her dad dies now, she has her own sovereignty to defend. She isn't a submissive or slave. There would be more sex, that's the end of the thought. She would probably fuck his son. But her as the dominant.

She can save her people by killing him, because the opposition strategist is dead. It gives her units an advantage to win. Because there disoriented.

Once again. She would probably fuck his son, the prince. But her as the dominant.

Yes, but you said she didn't know she was a queen. She would fuck the son as a dominant? She would have had her eyes closed and he would have had to pry her legs apart as the church, the second estate, taught women only whores enjoyed sex. (It still teaches that). The son.wouldn't fuck her..He'd kill her for acting like a man and because she killed the king. Now if your story was a medieval bdsm fantasy, I might buy your premise.

 

[loquere]

Yes, but you said she didn't know she was a queen. She would fuck the son as a dominant? She would have had her eyes closed and he would have had to pry her legs apart as the church, the second estate, taught women only whores enjoyed sex. (It still teaches that). The son.wouldn't fuck her..He'd kill her for acting like a man and because she killed the king. Now if your story was a medieval bdsm fantasy, I might buy your premise.

This is a feminist piece

The king? The true King for this Kingdom is dead, she doesn't recognize him as king. She is a strong wise woman that with chart her own path (Equal rights and all that jazz). He's the opposing King, and she takes the prince, like a man would a woman.

shes ordained by God

-My answer to anything else with be

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IkL9SB06Tpc

 

[LadyVer]

This is a feminist piece

The king? The true King for this Kingdom is dead, she doesn't recognize him as king. She is a strong wise woman that with chart her own path (Equal rights and all that jazz). He's the opposing King, and she takes the prince, like a man would a woman.

shes ordained by God

-My answer to anything else with be

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IkL9SB06Tpc

I'm not arguing whether it's feminist or not. But you placed this in the MA and said she would be a dominant to the prince. Now if you want to write this as a bdsm medieval fantasy, this would work. But if you want to write it just as a MA fiction it doesn't make much sense, to me. But you're the writer so write what you want. I'm just telling you want I think.

 

[loquere]

I'm not arguing whether it's feminist or not. But you placed this in the MA and said she would be a dominant to the prince. Now if you want to write this as a bdsm medieval fantasy, this would work. But if you want to write it just as a MA fiction it doesn't make much sense, to me. But you're the writer so write what you want. I'm just telling you want I think.

Dominant not bdsm. She would fuck him like she was the man. Not bdsm at all.

 

[LadyVer]

Dominant not bdsm. She would fuck him like she was the man. Not bdsm at all.

whatever you say.

 

[loquere]

whatever you say.

Thank YO!

 

[LadyVer]

Thank YO!

So when are you writing this story?

 

[loquere]

So when are you writing this story?

-2099

 

[LadyVer]

-2099

 

[HeyAll]

That actually sounds very erotic. A young queen agrees to have sex with the enemy king to avoid more battles.

The thing about the murder scene is although it makes sense for the story, you've got to keep in mind what Lit would allow. I don't think they allow graphic death scenes. It's got to be tame.

The dominant sex aspect is also very interesting. I'd love to read this.

 

[loquere]

That actually sounds very erotic. A young queen agrees to have sex with the enemy king to avoid more battles.

The thing about the murder scene is although it makes sense for the story, you've got to keep in mind what Lit would allow. I don't think they allow graphic death scenes. It's got to be tame.

The dominant sex aspect is also very interesting. I'd love to read this.

I like to make my stories spicy. Thank you I am now confirmed that this idea has many opinions.

Thanks, HeyAll support like this makes me feel like staying up all night through this cold and writing it.

 

[HeyAll]

If she's the dominant, I could imagine a scene where she's got a blunt attitude about it, while the male character is a little intimidated by her beauty.

Perhaps it's one of those scenes where she slowly walks forward with a "less get this over with" attitude, and he walks backwards and eventually stumbles on his throne, which makes him sit on it.

The sexy young queen lifts up her elegant dress, undoes his pants, climbs on top of him, and rides him until he comes. That way, it's both erotic and dominating at the same time.

just a thought

 

[LadyVer]

I think Loq should write the story. Maybe he'll find a co-author...

 

[loquere]

I think Loq should write the story. Maybe he'll find a co-author...

U offering? Because you know why I can't commit. This would need to pretty equaly devised.

 

[loquere]

I retract that I have two many litt and real world commitments. 2099 I have to stick with that or I'm gonna die

 

[LadyVer]

I retract that I have two many litt and real world commitments. 2099 I have to stick with that or I'm gonna die

I hear you. You do keep coming up with good story ideas though.

 

[sassysasha89]

I'm thinking of a medieval story,

-A King has one daughter, he gets sick and there is an impending war. Even though he orders her not to go. She eventualy feels its her devine duty to lead the army into battle and ignores her fathers wish. She cuts jer beaitifull silky hair and charges the battle field with shimmering armor.

-She starts by winning the war but the other side soon starts to gain ground and starts taking her land and defenses. During the battle her dad dies and she becomes Queen, without knowing it.

-She meets with enemy king, and he makes an offer. That she be his puppet, after an internal battle she agrees to let him bed her to save her people.

-in a tent in the middle of the battle field she has sex with him, but slits his throat during the intercourse. then wins the battle, and soon has his son the prince declaring vengeance on her.

- in a tent in the middle of the battle field she has sex with him, creating an unsteady truce between them. then wins the battle, and King denounces the prince as his heir and named the bastard with Joan of Arc the crown prince. She soon has his son the prince declaring vengeance on her.

 

[loquere]

If she's the dominant, I could imagine a scene where she's got a blunt attitude about it, while the male character is a little intimidated by her beauty.

Perhaps it's one of those scenes where she slowly walks forward with a "less get this over with" attitude, and he walks backwards and eventually stumbles on his throne, which makes him sit on it.

The sexy young queen lifts up her elegant dress, undoes his pants, climbs on top of him, and rides him until he comes. That way, it's both erotic and dominating at the same time.

just a thought

I like this, kinda like I killed your father what are you going to do. Then she fuckss him. Technically he's a king now and she's a queen. Your scene is hot, I just missed it before. If I didn't have so many ongoing litt projects this would be nice

 

[HeyAll]

You could also turn the heat up and have foreplay, where she lifts her foot up and makes him kiss it.

She could also, during sex while she's riding him on his thrown, take off his crown and put it on her head. That would be incredibly disrespectful to his people.

All of the possibilities...

Frankly, I think it's hotter if SHE was in the charge of the more powerful kingdom, and SHE was being forced to be submissive. Just my thought.

 

[loquere]

You could also turn the heat up and have foreplay, where she lifts her foot up and makes him kiss it.

She could also, during sex while she's riding him on his thrown, take off his crown and put it on her head. That would be incredibly disrespectful to his people.

All of the possibilities...

Frankly, I think it's hotter if SHE was in the charge of the more powerful kingdom, and SHE was being forced to be submissive. Just my thought.

-I think feet are disgusting
-We never said which Kingdom was more powerfull. It's one kingdom now she rules both. He's her puppet. I'd like to see her clad in white and rich linnen crowning herself emperor!