Jerkoff on the bus

loquere

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A man jerking of on the bus is excited when an attractive woman comes over to help him out. He starts to feel pain right after she puts her hand on his member, because she's using the hottest of hot sauces as lube.
 
Seeing how he's into being dominated, and does like some pain with his pleasure, he doesn't stop her. The bus trip is supposed to take three hours, and with the sun setting behind them, it's unlikely they will be seen.

What happens after his ten minutes of painful pleasure ends? Does he return the favor?
 
I think this would be a good story, even without the hot sauce. Why does the woman help him? Why does he let her? What are their back-stories? What happens next? Lots of exploration you can add to the premise.
 
I think this would be a good story, even without the hot sauce. Why does the woman help him? Why does he let her? What are their back-stories? What happens next? Lots of exploration you can add to the premise.

Yeah, or a lot of mystery left behind, too. Raising questions can be as much fun as answering them, IMO - and some of the best works out there leave behind lots and lots and lots of questions!
 
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