Jennifer Kaye - My Story Day 1

[rocketman63]

What a fabulous story. The best loving wife story on the board.

 

[rocketman63]

What does anybody else think of her story?

 

[NCmVoyeur]

My Story Day 1

What I think of the story depends a lot on the perspective from which I view it. As a simple narrative of an evening's adventure (the story purports to be a true account), it's OK. The story flows along, there's attention to detail, she gives insights into her character, the adventures themselves are intriguing, and there's lots of sexual detail.

From a more 'literary' perspective, my reaction is 'oh, boy, yet another wife-gets-dressed-up-and-goes-dancing-at-a-club-while-hubby-watches' story.' As with many other devices(poker games, jacuzzis, etc.), the basic plot is so treadworn that several paragraphs into it, the story gave me that "I've read this before" feeling. One hopes in that case for something unique or refreshing, perhaps a different point of view or vision about the theme that one hasn't read before. Unfortunately, this story didn't have that.

 

[Jennifer Kaye]

Hi all. I just want to say thank you for all of the wonderful feedback I have received over the past year on my story.

Whether it be praise, constructive criticism, or negative comments, being that the story is the first and only thing I have written, I very much appreciated everything everybody has had to say.

Thanks!

 

[Royal_Prince]

oh boy yet "another loving wife story"
let me say it differently "Oh too cool another wife gets dressed up and goes to a club and husband watches while she gets..." There are a few of us that um, kind of get off on that. Maybe i guess you see the differences in the stories if you really get into that kind of thing. So i have never gotten the feeling I've read one before if I haven't. Each story (I've read anyway) is slightly different in its own way

 

[Jennifer Kaye]

I suppose as with most of the erotic genres (or any story genre for that matter), there is a limitation to the different type of scenarios that one may fantasize about. Hence, the retreading of certain scenarios is pretty much unavoidable.

Perhaps we were indeed a little unimaginative in creating a "new" fantasy scenario, but hey, we enjoyed it even if things got a little out of hand.

As pointed out, the story was indeed the telling of events as they occurred, so the production of a great literary work was not the motivation or goal. All of your criticisms are indeed valid, however.

Again, I appreciate ALL feedback, so please do keep it coming.

 

[rocketman63]

I just have to comment again jennifer. It's a shame your story was inadvertently omitted from the 200 awards for the first few days of voting, as I am sure had it been included from the beginning, you would be in the running for the number one spot.

Regardless, you are number one in my books.


Love,
Your number one fan
(I wish you would reply to me, I love you!)

 

[rocketman63]

That's 2000 awards.