gwen_gypsygirl
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- Feb 20, 2006
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Hi,
I'm writing a novella and in one of my chapters I have a couple of the characters speaking French (I think it's sexy). Only problem is my French is terrible, it used to be good at school but now it's horrible.
Here is the passage; the text in square brackets is what I'd like it to say. I apologize to any French people out there for mangling their language:
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Penny turned back, and then in a lower voice she said, “Elle est tres docile, elle sera un jouet parfait pour tu” [“She’s very submissive, she’ll be a perfect toy for you”]
It was Brendan’s turn to chuckle,. “Á ce moment, vous etes le seul jouet que je veux jouer avec,”.[“right now, you are the only toy I want to play with”] he replied
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I'm writing a novella and in one of my chapters I have a couple of the characters speaking French (I think it's sexy). Only problem is my French is terrible, it used to be good at school but now it's horrible.
Here is the passage; the text in square brackets is what I'd like it to say. I apologize to any French people out there for mangling their language:
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Penny turned back, and then in a lower voice she said, “Elle est tres docile, elle sera un jouet parfait pour tu” [“She’s very submissive, she’ll be a perfect toy for you”]
It was Brendan’s turn to chuckle,. “Á ce moment, vous etes le seul jouet que je veux jouer avec,”.[“right now, you are the only toy I want to play with”] he replied
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