Jack

[Lady_Raisa]

I thought i would make a new one since my old one died . This one is called JACK . It is about Jack the Ripper. I need someone to play the head police man and many to play other people like prositutes(sorry can't spell) and others . I will play the imfamous Jack the Ripper .

 

[Rayv]

Ill Play Head of SCottlin Yards

Are we play ing Modern day or Old time I need to know Befor I make My Bio

 

[Lady_Raisa]

old day... depends how it works out... maybe we could get a reincarnation if the rpg works out well

 

[Rayv]

Character

Name: John O'Hair
Job : Chef Of Police At scotlen Yard
Age: 30
Eyes: Green
Hair: Red white streek At the front
Not marrid Tough old Nut

 

[Lady_Raisa]

I think i will add anouther person for me to be , just cuz no one is joining us. I will be ::
Sarah
age:27
eyes:blue
hair:blonde
job: prositute
Sarah is a kind gentle soul but pissed off cuz Jack is killing her friends . She is out of control when she is mad and will do anything to kill jack the ripper .She is tall and thin and very buetiful. (sorry can't spell)

 

[Rayv]

John O'Hair

John Looks AT the case files on his desk He surches trough all the reports on Jack The ripper He thinks how Much he Wants to catch this guy

 

[Rayv]

New Charactor

Name Dr. James Moreartie
Job: Bad Guy Geainus ExStoranair
Age: 40
eyes: Blue
hair: Blond
Works With ripper Ocationaly
Is Vary Charming ANd Deveius

 

[Lady_Raisa]

JACK

dear dairy , 31st August 1888
I killed her. I killed Mary Ann Nichols. I had been following her for a few hours noticing that everyone was calling her Polly. She had been talking to a few other whores when i disided she was my first victem. She had walked away from her friends and i followed her to a quiet corner called Buck's Row, London. I came out and intorduced myself as Jack . Plainly and simple . She gave me a smile of untidey teeth and wrapped her arm around my arm. and asked :
" HI Jack" she said in a sexy voice . " Anything i can do for you ?"
I explained to her that my wife wouldn't have anal sex with me that night and i had stromed out of the house hoping to get something off my chest , " I know what you mean." she winked at me and giggled . then i explained to her that I had seen her from a distence and thought that she was very buetiful and i would love getting to know her on a more lovely way. she giggled at this and shifted her leg. She grabbed my hand and went alittle into a dark alley. She then proseeded to lift up her skirt in the back and showed me her buttock. I placed one gloved hand on her lower back as if i was to really shove into her and my other hand was free. Pulling my knife out I grabbed her thoart and sliced her there. Leaving her neck to bleed I then turned her around and threw her onto the ground and sat on her legs with my knees holding her twisting and struggleing arms and placed my knife against her abdomen and began to slice . She tried to scream but i placed my hand on her lips to slience her. Then I left her to bleed to death . She died very quickly . I then pulled her into the alley even more and picked up her front skirt. I lowered my body around her and placed my hand over my penis and began to masterbate . Finishing up i got up and let my cum fall intoa garbage pail that was full of other garbage juice . I laughed and turned away. I had done i good deed. I killed a stupid dirty whore .

 

[Lady_Raisa]

OOC: I don't think JACK had a helper in his crimes . But there are many therios so who knows. But he can still help. maybe you should read up about Jack the Ripper . He is very intersting . I love reading up on him . All the dates i have for the murders are true ... But there are therios that there were more so i will be adding more ... if you have any friends that might want to play , get them to , cuz as wonderfull as the topic no one seems to like it *cries * I just can't please them! okay now i am getting foolish . heh heh now back to playing *evil laughter comes out of nowhere*

sarah

Sarah licked her lips as Jacob pulled his pants up. "Why thank you Jacob for that fun... you were wonderfull." Jacob gives her a quick hug and exits her paid for room . Sarah looked in her mirror and combs her hair . Then exitting her room she runs into Marie "Jeanette" Kelly.
"Hi Marie... lookie here ." Sarah pulls out 20 pounds. "Good night tonight . "
"I may say , that Jacob is a looker . and he pays very well..."Marie smiles and watchs Jacob walk out .
"He's mine marie . "Sarah says very calmly and looks at Marie. "Or I'll have to spank you . "
"thats the costermers job." Marie laughs and they both walk out the door to find there next costermer.


ooc::
heres a picture of Sarah.. just think of her in 1888 whore clothes

 

[Rayv]

OOC you are right Jack didnt Have help But I love British Crim Novel Ex pecely SHerlock Holms And Moriartie Was the Graetist Crimanel there was Sary Bad spelling And I all ways Wanted to play him. There wer thirys that the rRippr was John O'Hair the Scotlen Yard cop Who worked the cases to cetch him ANy way Id Figerd A ginuse helping a mad man would be good Story

 

[Lady_Raisa]

OOC:: it would be intersting ... well see you though the story

 

[Rayv]

The Dr.

Moriartie was Prouud of him self he had found the perfect pown to kepp the scotlyn yard buissy while he did more profitble things

 

[Lady_Raisa]

Sarah

sarah woke up the next morning and heard troubled crys outside her window. Looking out she saw many of her whore friends gathering around talking . She quickly got dressed and walked down. "what seems to be the matter?"
" They found her dead. "
"who"Sarah asked troubled
"Polly Nichols"
Sarah gasped "no"
"yes , she was cut up into pieces "
"no , shes eggsatering (eep my spelling) She was cut at her belly and her thoart was cut ..." Nicolette said bowing her head in a moment of respect. Sarah ran off. She would find out who did this ! She ran to scotland yard and stopped at the gates , combing her hair with her fingers and smoothing her dress she stepped inside .....

 

[Rayv]

John O'Hair

John Was seting at his Desk in his office look ing through his fills on some crimanals

 

[Lady_Raisa]

Sarah walked up to John's desk... " I want to know about Polly's death"
"Excuse me?"John looked up from his papers .
"About Polly's death ... you know she was murdered last night.. I heard about it and i want the details . "
"oh. the east end murder..."
"Yes the east end murder . now tell me about it before i got bloody mad!"

 

[Rayv]

John O'Hair

Well ma'am I have men On that case but I cant discuss it with you at this point . Now if thats All My lovely Lady I am Buesy ."

 

[Lady_Raisa]

Sarah grunted and pulled her blonde hair out of her face ..."who is the bloody killer . Cuz when i find him I am going to tear him apart!"

 

[Rayv]

John O'Hair

" It could be anumber of people at this point Ma'aM Mr. Hide, Mariartie. Or Even Butcher Branigan. Or maybe Some one new"

 

[Lady_Raisa]

Sarah let a gasp of upset out . She stormed from the office and sat on the step. She put her head in her hands and cried .

 

[Rayv]

John O'Hair

Walks out side to Shara, " I am Sorry Ma'am Its just been A busy Day. I'll keep you in formed if when we find something

 

[Lady_Raisa]

" you don't understand . that was my BLOODY FRIEND!!! not just some whore that was killed . my friend , but a guy like youwho does nothing but his work wouldn't understand that!"

 

[DarkTalon]

Hay Can A New guy Play I would like to take over the part of The Dr. Guy what did you call him Moreartie

 

[Lady_Raisa]

OOC:doesn't someone else play him ? or did he quit *is really confussed*

 

[Lady_Raisa]

OOC : you can play to...I'm just confussed about what happened to Rayv

 

[Rayv]

OOC: I am Here I just havent been Playing I thought you were mad at me and Talon Go head if you think you vcan do better tAke my docter