Ginantonix
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- Feb 27, 2013
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Hello to all you wondeful people!
I have only very recently found and joined Literotica. I confess I'm a little overwhelmed by the size of the site, the number of contributors and ... well, fact is, I still haven't got my head around it all!
Having said all of that, I posted my first story the day I joined. I was amazed at the number of people who have looked at it already!
I would dearly like to read any feedback anyone may care to contribute. I am most keenly interested in how the story appeals to either sex. Does the writing and descriptive style appeal more to men than to women or vice versa? If you consider it orientated more to one gender than another can you perhaps explain why this is so and suggest how the writing may be changed to better appeal to both sexes. Or is that not possible? Is the male and female erotic response too different?
Love to get your comments.
The link to the tale is here.
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-knothole
Ginantonix.
I have only very recently found and joined Literotica. I confess I'm a little overwhelmed by the size of the site, the number of contributors and ... well, fact is, I still haven't got my head around it all!
Having said all of that, I posted my first story the day I joined. I was amazed at the number of people who have looked at it already!
I would dearly like to read any feedback anyone may care to contribute. I am most keenly interested in how the story appeals to either sex. Does the writing and descriptive style appeal more to men than to women or vice versa? If you consider it orientated more to one gender than another can you perhaps explain why this is so and suggest how the writing may be changed to better appeal to both sexes. Or is that not possible? Is the male and female erotic response too different?
Love to get your comments.
The link to the tale is here.
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-knothole
Ginantonix.
