I've Got Some Incest/Threesome Ideas...

[AudreyMontgomery]

I'm trying to decide what will be my first on-line piece of erotica that I should pursue, and I'm debating between a few threesome/incest scenario's. Which one would you reccomend for me to pursue?

1) A Younger Man
Amy is 18, her sister Heather is 21, and her brother Chris is 15. When Heather returns home for spring break from university, she and Amy begin chatting about how things have been, and through conversation, both realize that they fancy their brother. They agree to share him, since now they don't want to exclude the other. Despite the fact neither has had a bisexual experience before, they agree all bets are off in attempts to seduce Chris. Unfortunately, he is a bit daft and it takes them many attempts to finally bed him. A bit of a comical tone.

2) With or Without Me
Amy returns home one night to hear an intense sound coming from upstairs. She traces it to her father's bedroom, but knows her mother is out of town. When she takes a peek inside, she sees her father tangled with Emily and Jessica Ross--Her girlfriend and girlfriend's sister, respectively. Once the two girls leave, Amy confronts her father in an angry throw down and demands to know what happened. He reveals the threesome, in every detail, to her in flashbacks. No Amy/Father sex in this one, mind you.

3) The Faceless Wonder
Amy is tired of relationships based on looks, so she seeks out someone on-line, where she thinks she can make a real connection. She does so with an older man, in his forties. They begin to have amazing chats and cyber sex, both falling for each other despite the fact they don't know their real identies. They agree to mysterious, silent, and blind-folded encounters where they can explore each other's bodies, just not faces or voices. Finally they agree to meet to see each other's face once and for all, and Amy finds it to be her father! Will she continue seeing him?

Any input would be appreciated on which I should pursue. Thanks!

 

[silversword]

just a few suggestions for you:

1) 15 years old is a definate no no on Lit, 18 or above for any character involved in sexual scenes.
That does kind of put a scupper on this one but how about the brother being old and seducing his sisters, maybe one at a time, then he tries to get them together.

2) Interesting idea, perhaps Amy can find somewhere to hind so she can watch. Rather than have her father recount it to her, or perhaps when she confronts him and talks to him she finds out that she gets turned on by discussing it with her father and encourages him to do it again and let her watch.

3) Almost certainly been done before, but written well can work, you really need and original twist though.

as to which one to pursue, it doesn't really matter, write them all if you want.

good luck and enjoy

silver

 

[sirhugs]

I think #2 is the most interesting, but the toughest to create a plausible reason why the friends are there . Suggested title " What Friends Are For".

Idea #1 has been done in various forms, so needs to be intense. I would not have the girls agree all bets are off before hand. Instead, have Chris demand this " If incest is so okay, why don't you two prove it.". Depspite agreeing before hand they weren't bi, the girls do. Perhaps one secretly is bi, and becomes the Teacher of Two( title?). Make Chris 18, the girls 20 and 21.


I don't think #3 is done to death, but it just doesn't appeal. A lot of story, so you would need a lot of sex.