I've craving this story

[belverd]

I've been visiting this site and reading the fantastic stories on here for quite a few years now but still feel slightly unsatisfied with the stories so far.
I love incest stories particularly between father and daughter. I have several "fetishes" or aspects of stories that I love that have not been written about much at all.
I absolutely crave an incest story of a dominant/submissive nature. not with violence but with the mere act of the daughter giving up her rights to her father. her treats her as a child, orders her about and she complies because she doesnt know her better. she's extremely innocent and has only been told the bare facts about life. obviously he demands sex at any time of the night.


If whoever would write this type of story i most greatfully thank you!!!

Plus incest/pregnancy is another story line not well written about that I am extremely interested in. Pleeeaaasssseeeee someone write this type of story

 

[NASCARaddicted]

well, nowadays it's rare that an 18 year old girl knows nothing about sex. Maybe she is very naive and stupid ....

But I guess a story like that may happen in a remote area and maybe many years ago, before the internet, tv and newspapers

I always had the idea of a father and daughter being in a shipwreck and ending up on an empty island. The girl knows nothing about contraceptives, and so, she becomes pregnant ....

However, not the same like your idea, but: maybe the father treats his daughter like a kid.
For example: It's the 18th birhtday of the girl. Her father gives her a present. She opens it and is surprised: it's a barbie doll.
"Daddy, I am not a kid. I am 18, an adult woman"
"Ah, you are so sweet when you try to behave like an adult woman, but for me, you will always be a little kid".

"A kid ? well, then take a look at this" - the girl rips her blouse open and shows her father her nice 36 DD boobs (yeah, I know the size is too unrealistic, but it's just an example). "and, I already had sex. When I give a blowjob to a guy, some have such a big orgasm, that they actually pass out .... come on Dad, I prove it. I will give you a blowjob, and if you don't pass out, you can keep on calling me a kid. But if you pass out, you will treat me like an adult woman from now on" ....

 

[GoodLilPet]

well, nowadays it's rare that an 18 year old girl knows nothing about sex. Maybe she is very naive and stupid ....

Belverd said, "he treats her as a child, orders her about and she complies because she doesnt know her better. she's extremely innocent and has only been told the bare facts about life."

So, it seems obvious that the girl in question does not know much about life, as Belverd explained. There's many reasons why this could happen, and since the father is dominant and controls his daughter's life that's all the reader needs to know about it.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Belverd said, "he treats her as a child, orders her about and she complies because she doesnt know her better. she's extremely innocent and has only been told the bare facts about life."

So, it seems obvious that the girl in question does not know much about life, as Belverd explained. There's many reasons why this could happen, and since the father is dominant and controls his daughter's life that's all the reader needs to know about it.

Well, o.k. so he treats her like a child. But still, I think that's not enough.
For example: What about school ? If the story is placed in modern days, then the girl has to visit a school. I think I was about 10, when the teachers told us about sex (but I already knew quite some things from other pupils).

That's why I suggested that the story is placed in an isolated area, without a tv, without other people. When the girl reaches the puberty, he could tell her, that it's normal, that woman get boobs - for no reason.
Once she is 18, he could tell her that she has to become pregnant. He tells her about sex - but to become pregnant, sex ain't enough. It has to be sex with the father ....

 

[belverd]

welllll

the idea of the story being set in an isolated location is a good one to maintain realism. However i dont see why a fantasy story has to be made entirely realistic since thats what fantasy is right?
I wouldnt like the daughter to take the lead as outlined in your idea NASCA. The daughter needs to be submissive because she is so innocent and ill-informed. Plus the daddy shouldnt feel guilty about his feelings because it seems only natural (which would again seem more realistic set in an isolated area).
I do like the idea of her being told she can only get pregnant with her daddy.
This is one of my fantasies. There are hardly any d/s incest stories around and i think thats sad. plus i think i've read practically every daddy/daughter incest story so we really need some more Particularly along these lines. I would love if someone who shares an interest in this story line to write something. I'll certainly be on the lookout.

 

[GoodLilPet]

Well, o.k. so he treats her like a child. But still, I think that's not enough.
For example: What about school ?

Home schooling. It's very well known in the states and is used often.

That's why I suggested that the story is placed in an isolated area, without a tv, without other people.

Isolation is not necessary. Something like this could still take place in a well known highly populated city/suburb. Strict parents (even ones who are not living some "pervy life" of molesting their children) monitor and/or deny TV viewing in their homes all the time.

When the girl reaches the puberty, he could tell her, that it's normal, that woman get boobs - for no reason.

They wouldn't accept that here, right?

 

[MidBlu]

Your suggestion of a daughter being "ordered around" by her father is not erotic, it is cruel. Any Dom/Sub relationship has as one of it's foundations voluntary participation. The younger the woman, the more important it is to show her respect and courtesy. Only then can true relationship and intimacy flower.

 

[destinie21]

ideas

this is a great story idea The problem of the daughter being "innoccent" and not knowing much about sex could easily be solved by having the father in this story be very wealthy thereby allowing him to have her schooled by only tutors and to make sure her friends are hand selected and her outside images such as tv and internet could simply have parental blocks. Also she is 18 so she is very curious about sex and the sexual feelings she would have been having since puberty and is therefore happy to submit to her father as she has always done in every other aspect of her life.
the father being wealthy would also explain why her life is so sheltered:he's afraid of someone kidnapping her for ransom or blackmail and therefore feels the need to control her life.

 

[easysub]

story

Sorry I don't think any 18yr old is that innocent. Won't work unless you make her younger--Just my opinion-Sara

 

[belverd]

Hi sara, thanks for your reply. Younger than 18 isn't allowed on literotica and come to think of it I think it would be kinda cool for the daughter to be a little older than 18. shows just how much of an influence her father has been since most of us are pretty independent by 18.
but regardless the age restriction on here is for good reason but i reckon my fantasy can be shown using an older girl dont you think?
Bron

 

[MidBlu]

Sara's statement is nonetheless true, Belverd. It just doesn't work with an adult. It is my opinion that as long as the female character you are speaaking of is given a voice, then an interplay can happen. A robotic 18-year-old is unrealistic.

 

[pop_54]

Yeppers

Sara's statement is nonetheless true, Belverd. It just doesn't work with an adult. It is my opinion that as long as the female character you are speaaking of is given a voice, then an interplay can happen. A robotic 18-year-old is unrealistic.

This is the big problem with writing for Lit, they have rules to stick to, and no 18 yr old in this day and age of TV and newspapers is gunna be that thick and unworldly.
Well maybe they are, but you won't get the wider readership to believe it, they may be a bunch of rednecks with a single track mind, but they know a silly plot when they see one.

The only way round this one is to write it for a less strict site and use a believable age for the daughter and the fact she wasn't born at 18 as must be assumed and written on Lit.

Or:

Set your tale way back in early times, say the early 1900's when uneducated kids were common in poorer families, and there was no access to TV and little real newspaper coverage of matters sexual.

It's a grand idea for a tale, the overpowering dad using the daughter as he pleases, but care is needed with the telling.
Of course she must get pregnant by daddy as someone said.

pops...............

 

[NASCARaddicted]

pop_54, take a look at this thread, it has another suggestion about "being innocent at 18"

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=179079

 

[Rainbow Skin]

Well yes, this innocence thing is problematic. At a rough guess about 40% of stories here are about underage girls, 14-year-olds or so.

Now because of the stupid US federal law that uses maximum state age of consent, they have to be nominally 18.

So you get halfwits with an IQ of 75, and 18-year-olds who've never masturbated and have tiny budding breasts. Realistic, or what?