I've been dying to read this story....

KennedyR

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I read a story similar to this many years ago, and I've been dying to find it agian, or something similar ever since. If someone could write it, I think it would be awesome.

The main character is a college aged guy who is dating the woman of his dreams. They have plans to be married, but not until after college. They engage in various sexual activities, but she refuses to engage in actual intercourse with him until after they are married. He is naturally frustrated, but since they are in love, he settles for giving and receiving oral sex, and the like.

One evening, they go on a double date with a good friend of the main charcter and his girlfriend. This friend is more popular than the main character, better looking, etc....women are always after him, and you get the sense that he goes through a lot of them. He could paly for the footbball team or whatever (you get the picture). The girl he brings on the double date is an absolute knockout (blonde, big tits, tight ass, the works..) The main character's friend has been forthcoming to him on several occasions about just how great sex with her is, which plays against his own frustrations at his girlfriend not going all the way.

The double date goes well, with the friend flirting with the main character's girlfriend. She enjoys the attention, but remains aloof. The group ends up either at a drive-in or at someone's apartment, and they start fooling around with their respective partners. Things get serious when the friend's date goes down on him. Our hero and his girl are turned on by watching this, and with some gentle nudging, the main character gets his girl to go down on him as well.

Meanwhile the football player type moves on to actually fucking his girl from behind. Our hero is a little jealous, but is consoled a little when his friend offers to let him feel his date's ass while he does her doggy style.

The football player then flips his date over and really starts to go to work. His date responds well and starts making some noise. The main character's girlfriend, hearing the commotion, comes up for air (much to the dissapointment of our hero who was getting close to coming). For a moment they watch together, entranced by the beautiful couple fucking right next to them.

Our hero's girlfriend is obviously turned on and pushes his head down to her pussy. He goes down on her and is amazed by how wet she is. He goes to work in earnest, and she obviously loves it, she is really turned on. At one point, he hears her wimpering, and she starts to come. He looks up and sees that while his friend is fucking his date, his is kissing his girlfriend that he has been eating out.

Soon thereafter, he comes up for air and together he and his girlfriend watch as the other couple fucks. The football type then suggests that they switch partners. The hero, who is really turned on and is still a little jealous at not being able to fuck his girl jumps at the opportunity without asking his girlfriend. He is on the blonde hottie in seconds and they make out for a while. She's a little worn out after the fucking she just got, so it is slow going, but he is in awe of how hot she is. He is totally lost in what he is doing until he hears a sound from his girlfriend.

He looks over and is aghast to see that his girlfriend has allowed his buddy to penetrate her and they are actually fucking. He can't believe it, he is angry and hurt that the girl that has been saving her cherry for the wedding night and putting him off for so long is now giving it up for his friend. He takes out his feeling on the hottie that he is with, forcefully finger fucking her to a screaming orgasm, all the while not taking his eyes off of his buddy and his girlfriend. (nothing violent here, but it's obious he's displacing his emotions.)

Once she recovers, she thanks him for the orgasm. She knows what is going on, and gives him a consolation hand job while she tries to console him by whispering to him what a great person his is, and how she doesn't know how he can watch this. He isn't into the hand job, though as he is still staring at the couple next to them.

It's a long quiet ride home for our hero and his girl. The next day she apologizes, says that she hopes she hasn't ruined their relationship, but will understand if he never wants to see her again. She offers to fuck him. He is not happy, but is forced to admit that he still loves her. They do have sex and they both love it. Afterwars she offers to give him her anal cherry as consolation. He reluctantly forgives her and they get over this rocky patch and go on to get married. He still thinks about that night sometimes and it turns him on.

If someone is inspired, please write this up, it think it could be so hot if it is done well.
 
There is nothing wrong or lacking with your writing abilities. Why don't you take that one on yourself?
 
I'm afraid what I posted above is pretty much the extent of my writing abilities. I'm okay with plot, but when it comes to really painting the picture and filling in the details, I'm woefully inadequate.

I really hope someone reads this and is inspired to turn it into something nice.
 
Oh no. You aren't getting off the hook that easy. Your first post shows a strong imagination and the ability to capture it inb writing. You have the complete story outline done. Now you just have to put some personality into your characters, some words in their mouth, some thoughts in their heads and the action will take are of itself.

Go for it.
 
OOC: I'd have to second that, and you've got a pretty good plot to back you up. Just give it a try yea....:)
 
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