It's up!!! Go and beat the crap out of it!

[Le Jacquelope]

Lady Bashirah, Chapter 1 is up! It's not a short story, or the last part; and due to the advice of editors, I cut a lot out of it.

I don't even dig doing super short stories, not judging anyone else, but I'm not into mere rut&gruntfests.

But still, some have said it's too long, hence I trimmed it, although I hate stripping the plot that I had built around it. Sigh.

So tell me, what do ya think?

 

[MathGirl]

I'm not into mere rut&gruntfests

Dear LT,
You wouldn't like any of my stuff then.
MG
Ps. Plot? Whazzat?

 

[Le Jacquelope]

Re: Re: It's up!!! Go and beat the crap out of it!

Dear LT,
You wouldn't like any of my stuff then.
MG
Ps. Plot? Whazzat?

I didn't say I don't read 'em... I just don't write 'em

But given the page size of most stories on here, I am thinking I should make future stories much smaller...!

 

[MathGirl]

Dear LT,
Smaller is usually better, I've found.
MG

 

[Le Jacquelope]

Dear LT,
Smaller is usually better, I've found.
MG

The emails I've gotten about this scream at me "more! more!"

Well, I'll give more, but I hope in fewer words and pages, LOL!