It's that time again

[CeriseNoire]

That's right, it's begging time! My newest story Fight was posted today. So of course it's time for me to beg for reads, votes, and comments. Come on, reading's good for you

 

[mjl2010]

Read, commented, voted.

MJL

 

[CeriseNoire]

Thanks

Thanks for reading. It's much appreciated. By the way, I read your Ch. 01. I'm looking forward to more.

 

[mjl2010]

Thanks for reading. It's much appreciated. By the way, I read your Ch. 01. I'm looking forward to more.

Ch. 2 is in, just waiting (impatiently as always) for them to post it.

MJL

 

[DragosLove]

I read it, it was good, but failed to truly catch my attention. Unfortuanely I don't really have any suggestions for improvement.

 

[CeriseNoire]

Ch. 2 is in, just waiting (impatiently as always) for them to post it.

MJL

Oh good. I'll be looking out for it.

 

[mikey2much]

nice story

HI,
You write a nice story and I liked the little details that you provided to flesh it out a bit. For my taste it was a little on the vanilla side, but I did read ,vote and now I have commented.
I will look for more from you in the future. Maybe you can help give me a little insight into the female mindset.
mike

 

[MarshAlien]

I liked it!

It was a nice, sweet tale of love. Some of the images - Mike pinning her against the wall, a sponge bath followed by a blow job - will stay with me all day. And into the night. There were a few typos that I found a little jarring, and I think it more likely that, as a girlfriend, Weslie would have been listed on some little card in Mike's wallet as a "contact" rather than a "next of kin." But those are pretty small. My only real problem was her biting him "as hard as she could." Yikes. This kind of puts her in Mike Tyson territory, doesn't it? I would have preferred, even as a guy, to see her knee him in the crotch. Painful, yes, but much easier to forgive. Nicely done, though. Now I'll go back and read the rest of the Mike and Weslie stories. Thanks for calling them to my attention.

Marsh

 

[Arafura]

I read and commented! Loved the hospital blowjob scene...suggestions for improvement (less filler, mainly) are included in my comment.

 

[CeriseNoire]

Thank you

First, I want to thank everyone for taking the time to read my story. Second, I would like to point out that there was a reason I put this one in ROMANCE rather than EC like the other 2 Mike and Wes stories. I figure people looking for stroke would avoid it (that's what I do when I'm looking for a stroke story).

Arafura, you might enjoy my very first submission a bit more since that one was pretty much sex with little plot.

MarshAlien, I intended for what she did to be unusually vicious, and a knee in the crotch seemed too expected.

The Mike and Weslie stories are pretty much the tamest stories I've written, since I originally started them for someone who is very much like Mike. The few things I'm working on now are not likely to fall under romance, so Mikey2much, you mind find those more interesting.

Thanks again everyone.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

My newest submission <-- In need of RVCs

Done it and sent you a mail.

I've said that I think you don't explain Wes and Mike enough for a stand alone story - no prob for us here, your fans, who've followed from the start.

I was puzzling about what people meant by too much filler in a romance and I think I've sussed it. The bit about cell ring tones and the stuff about next of kin (she can't be by the way - she's not kin) and Dr Parsons kills the flow a bit.

Anyway, I'll always open and read a Cerise story - especially now you're going to get down and dirty.

Elle

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Good story. There were a few problems. I sort of expected Wes to fuck the doctor or the big-titted red-head, but that would have made it a different story altogether. As it is, I would have toned them both down a bit.

It rather stretched my belief system when Wes licked the precum from Mike's dugged out cock... but it was ok.

I knew you had promise, CeriseNoire. Keep up the good work. You are there as a writer of quality porn

 

[CeriseNoire]

I've said that I think you don't explain Wes and Mike enough for a stand alone story - no prob for us here, your fans, who've followed from the start.

I have fans ?! *thud*

But seriously, thank you for all the kind words and support. I feel that you and Jenny have a lot to do with the growth in my writing. The thing about next of kin does make sense now that it's been pointed out. I totally overlooked that.

Eheh, about the precum thing, I actually asked my mom (who is a nurse) about drugs and the possibility of erection. Considering I didn't tell her why I needed to know, she looked at me kind of funny. I hope she's not thinking I'm drugging guys on the weekend.

Thanks again everyone

 

[elfin_odalisque]

I have fans ?! *thud*

'Course you have fans. Why the heck d'you think you keep getting those pretty pink H's and we all gather here on the site to worship you.

You write enjoyable stories real well and you are a lovely, bubbly person.

Way to go girl.

 

[CeriseNoire]

'Course you have fans. Why the heck d'you think you keep getting those pretty pink H's and we all gather here on the site to worship you.

You write enjoyable stories real well and you are a lovely, bubbly person.

Way to go girl.

Thank you, Elle. That's really sweet

Now if only I could finish the other 3 stories I'm working on...

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Thank you, Elle. That's really sweet

Now if only I could finish the other 3 stories I'm working on...

I was going to say the best way is to start a fourth, then I looked at my Word files and realized I've got about 20 part finished stories. Why won't she get into bed with him?

Go get a glass of wine and go fantasize.